vital for survival ft shadyfreakzul and element

[Edge]

Edge:
Keep claiming I don’t know how to break-out-in-rhyme
And I’l take-out-the-nine or shake-out-ya-spine
I take-out-the-time, but no one every shows-respect
now im looking to snap vertebrates, and I chose-ya-neck
My flows-the-best, but no one ever seems to give me any props
Even though I give one hundred and ten percent on many drops
So now, im rightfully coming to take what belongs to me
because the hip-hop crown, deep down, it longs for me
I gotta go and do work, cause few work, or go as hard as I go
And if you don’t feel the same, I rip ya guts out like lypo
Writing high with typos, words burn the page up like a pyro
Everyone listening to my flow, might go, this boy is psycho
Walking on a tightrope, might just fall over the edge
If you wanna hot sixteen, just call over the Edge
I come with fire, cause my desire is to not expire
Not a liar, always tell the truth, never plots conspire
never get it by ya, im doing my thing for this bitch
rap lives forever, as long as im breathing it wont be dismissed

Shadyfreakzul:
Ever since i heard you speak, never wanna let you leave
Addicted to you, like a girl you stole my heart certainly
Dead legends suffering, wailing for your current state
Big L, Biggie, Tupac, G.O.A.T, where the fuck is forensics
More essence to the game now with the 3-headed monsters
me, edge, element but not much impact like the 3 murdered monsters
I swear if Biggie was alive he would have co-signed me
so i wouldn't go around looking for a deal like oh sign me
I'm not boasting here but i bless mics when i rap call me mic blessing
with hip-cred to lecture wack cats soulja boy the right lesson
Fuck the wack cats i'm putting them on da groung like jedi mind tricks
gayish innuendo like Mathew Perry, they claim they never ride dicks
Funny but we taking hip-hop in our hands now its vital
changing the face,bringing old skool lyricism back is high time
The day edge, element and i came together, hip-hop will never be at its last
even if we pass away like legends,fans will be digging our lyrics like artifacts

Edge:
Hip-hop is dead, help it, quick it needs revival
Handing me the crown is vital for survival
Wer bringing old-school lyricism, back to the table
hip-hops conditions critical, im bout to make it stable

Element:
ya'll be clockin' nines, for a pussy way to out-shine
but i be rockin' rhymes, just to be better looks like your a-sign
anyway lets get serious, your startin' to look delirious
shadyfreak is set imperious, but wack and took mysterious
lady lookin edgy, pushin' bush actin slammer Reggie
mayb related to pileggi, i dout it, grab the left-che nd start actin like a gangsta veggie
im lecherous so just leave, ima be likea leech give me a leash be like a disbelieve
dno why i tryed, must achive, ive changed to rap fillin then gap please believe
might aswell be treacherous who will care?, just like i told him she had an affair
this is just my chance to be a billionaire, sittin in this chair and no reason to compare.

Edge:
Hip-hop is dead, help it, quick it needs revival
Handing me the crown is vital for survival
Wer bringing old-school lyricism, back to the table
hip-hops conditions critical, im bout to make it stable

Edge:
Everything someone says got me buggin-out-like-crazy
everyone views me differently, well fuck-it-now-im-shady
Im feeling stressed out lately, so im on tour blazin
Not getting any props, because I am Caucasian
What you think im not hip hop cause I got a peacoat?
Than come at me and and my crew, and youl find we tote
Guns the size of three boats, and we choke on weed smoke
Ever since I was introduced to rap, my lifes been re-wrote
So fuck you, you should know that hip-hops in my blood
im gunna rep hip-hop til im dead, just burried in the mud
And even down in hell, probably smoking on a dub
Il be reppin hip-hop, showing the street some real love
Because rappers these days, don’t bleed out hip-hop music
Gangsta rap, I choose it, keep it real and never loose it
And maybe after this verse, youl never again mistake my name
So now hand over the crown, allow me to overtake this game

Edge:
Hip-hop is dead, help it, quick it needs revival
Handing me the crown is vital for survival
Wer bringing old-school lyricism, back to the table
hip-hops conditions critical, im bout to make it stable

[Yah-hah]

I always like seein the newer guys comin out with some fire. Edge you aint even a new guy any more you always come with fire consistantly. Try puttin some concept together and get some full length songs together. Your collabs are always good

Shadyfreakzul-I liked your last line. Idk if you have an accent, by the way you write I think you do, some lines seemed a bit off. But you had a couple pretty good multis in there, wanna see more from ya

Element-I liked your verse, but the rhymes were a bit simple. I'm not sure how long you've been writing so I aint gonna slam ya style or nothing. Like one time you rhymed disbelieve with believe, sometimes it kinds messes up the flow ya know. But I think once you get your rhythm down you'll be fire, alot of people on here will say you should get your mutli game up. like i said Idk wat your knowledge on rappin is, but mutlis really help the flow, at least for me it is. Check out my drops and you'll see wat I mean lol The "Mocasins and Red Chucks" one I did not too long is a good example. But just sayin keep working at it everyone. I like to see yall get better

[shadyfreakzul]

I always like seein the newer guys comin out with some fire. Edge you aint even a new guy any more you always come with fire consistantly. Try puttin some concept together and get some full length songs together. Your collabs are always good

Shadyfreakzul-I liked your last line. Idk if you have an accent, by the way you write I think you do, some lines seemed a bit off. But you had a couple pretty good multis in there, wanna see more from ya

Element-I liked your verse, but the rhymes were a bit simple. I'm not sure how long you've been writing so I aint gonna slam ya style or nothing. Like one time you rhymed disbelieve with believe, sometimes it kinds messes up the flow ya know. But I think once you get your rhythm down you'll be fire, alot of people on here will say you should get your mutli game up. like i said Idk wat your knowledge on rappin is, but mutlis really help the flow, at least for me it is. Check out my drops and you'll see wat I mean lol The "Mocasins and Red Chucks" one I did not too long is a good example. But just sayin keep working at it everyone. I like to see yall get better

thakns for the feedback dude.there is room for improvement..for the accent i am not sure i have one..maybe i might have one because african.thanks dude

[Edge]

thanks for the feedback and i appreciate the compliments
il try doing more concepts

[Element.]

Yeh, I was going to work on mine more but it looks like its to late,
and i see what ya sayin

[Fa-Q]

You all need to work on Vocab and multis (except edge on multis)...but pretty good...I enjoyed all the verses...all you guys are definately improving

[Element.]

You all need to work on Vocab and multis (except edge on multis)...but pretty good...I enjoyed all the verses...all you guys are definately improving

Thanks for the feed man,

[shadyfreakzul]

You all need to work on Vocab and multis (except edge on multis)...but pretty good...I enjoyed all the verses...all you guys are definately improving

thanks for the feedback..any hints on increasing vocab?

[Element.]

You all need to work on Vocab and multis (except edge on multis)...but pretty good...I enjoyed all the verses...all you guys are definately improving

thanks for the feedback..any hints on increasing vocab?

Read a dictionary that might do something.

[shadyfreakzul]

You all need to work on Vocab and multis (except edge on multis)...but pretty good...I enjoyed all the verses...all you guys are definately improving

thanks for the feedback..any hints on increasing vocab?

Read a dictionary that might do something.

like eminem..hahah remembered when i asked you for a battle you were like am not battling now..am increasing my vocabs lol

[Element.]

Yeh but one of them i done i beat you, And you was stressing out.

[Edge]

Wow, props to you all it was really good, but edge had the edge <

lmao i laughed at the wordplay there... thanks for the feed man

You all need to work on Vocab and multis (except edge on multis)...but pretty good...I enjoyed all the verses...all you guys are definately improving

thanks for the feed man, il have to up my vocab next time

Yeh but one of them i done i beat you, And you was stressing out.

and whats with the hostility against him? lol

[Element.]

No idea man lol

[Edge]

No idea man lol

play nice

[Element.]

Lol, Sorry mum