Multiple Rhymes

[Just Silver]

C4 brain i detour game
Detonate rep at stake
Best to take a second take
Records break shatter Guinness
The bottle and the book
So hobble looks that shook
Looks and swallow all you could
See i am with the ceased diaphragm
The beat of a man in a brand LX sedan
Spellcheck step like i'll be damned
My letters stay at stands with intensive fans
And do i rent the game no i own it bitch
But i will be a blockbuster till the day that i quit
And thats all that is it, words flow smooth bottom of lips
I just caught them in nips, and I drink my thoughts
Rethink my thoughts, puke till my verbs have rot
And make my journey a day to become
A raised analogy son, not an alley way bum
Like the brightest bulb, never lived in Watts
But i forever will get shot, my endeavors on a watch
And sundial be changing fast, arranging past
My fame to grasp, the insanest pact with
Webbed word arachnid,said sure im back with,
Super"B at" last its, flying and stinging
Deriving my singing ,for the price that its bringing
Its nice that its here but its a matter of ears
If you hearing the decibel you need a ladle
Get those able bodied stable, guys a fatal
Dose of my components, combined and stolen
from the best of professors and then the checks for contestants

[Just Silver]

bumppp

[Just Silver]

bump

[Fa-Q]

Ayo Silver....getting better, I like how it starts slow...like a build up, idk if that's what you wanted but that's how I read it. Some of the lines were pretty simple like the bum line but meh...doesn't matter...what I would like from you Silv is to get an idea for a great message song (I have no idea what) and write a badass song and take your time on it. Multis, Structure, and flow and I want you to fuckin earn some respect on here causae I think your just outside of a lotta respect, but people are still sleeping on you. Think about it Silve

[Just Silver]

Ayo Silver....getting better, I like how it starts slow...like a build up, idk if that's what you wanted but that's how I read it. Some of the lines were pretty simple like the bum line but meh...doesn't matter...what I would like from you Silv is to get an idea for a great message song (I have no idea what) and write a badass song and take your time on it. Multis, Structure, and flow and I want you to fuckin earn some respect on here causae I think your just outside of a lotta respect, but people are still sleeping on you. Think about it Silve

quite some feedback

and i really have no idea how i'd go about a song but i could try sometime- definitely will don't know when

this was an example of a mostly keystyled work and i usually get one idea as a line and keep going

i do need some more respect
but hey its all good