Immortal Endeavors!!

[QzA]

Immortal Endeavors
Hmmmmmm....I go unstable ,ripping the umbilical from Father times navel
ingesting light and everything on the periodic table
breaking Quantum theory , relativity is irrelevant
I snap chain reactions making cause-n-effect celibate
so what if I smash galaxies causing a wreck , the hell with it !!
small thing to what I detonate to make the universe swell a bit
Jealous? You puny earthlings go through generations as I blink once
Sometimes I lob celestial specks at the planet to extinct a bunch
Your just a marble of muddy liquid plagued with humanic cichlids
In the hearts of mortals grew panic inflicted by Myanic calenders I shifted
Glyphs I imprinted simplistic ,your Rosetta deciphered some sick shit
even through your limited linguistics, message was understood but missed a bit
Immoral immortal Misfit opening time portals like sliding glass
speeding through the wormholes ,tracers of stars and galaxies sliding past
Frictional impacts into nutrinos igniting mass
exiting the time shift into dimensions with an inviting blast
Thrown quickly into the unknown vast gas clouds envelope the zone
Chunks of massive Planets circle a spot where a Suns blown
pressures squeeze till atoms fuse forming complex molecules
reactions let loose energy boosts that break the rules of fossil feuls
Gas giants and neutron stars toss off hues in colossal feuds
Black holes sip the atmosphere from planets caught in hostel view
I clap !! Pow!! Rip time into thick lines ! let the space breach envelope me
Back to the milky cluster of lights to check up on the Humans developing

[classthe_king]

This is actually pretty good, lyrically its great with all your sciency stuff. Rhymes are alright. Only problem I have is make the lines shorter. It helps the flow.