Homage to Eminem (all enemies diss)

[Fa-Q]

This is definately good...I couldn't pick up on the flow...but that doesn't mean anything...took me awhile to read cause fuck it was long but...the lines are a little too long...the structure needs to be fixed up a bit but its definately good...

[Emadyville]

Yeah the structure of this really made it a task to read, especially cause of the length, and the flow I couldn't get, but it's written so, overall this was real good

[shadyfreakzul]

good work dude

[macdaddy019967]

goddamn
shit is dope as fuck

[gutawafang]

Man, release it soon.

[dR3]

So you sent me a PM just come and check this out?


I'm not a lyrics expert or something, but I liked this.

[Slim Zaddy]

damn this shit is so hot ,, it's long , but worth the reading , you got sick lines out there no doubt ,,,,,,,,, i like ya rhyming way ,,, you got talent bro ,, just keep on building em ,, but try to make ya line shorter , in order to keep the flow ,, but either way,, with ya rhymes it flows, well, lyrics are wisely used, ,, you got the complexity and the similes, and some good punchlines out there,, so ya ,, keeeeeeeep doin ya staff,,,,,,, wanna here more from ya ,, 9/10

[Slim Zaddy]

damn this shit is so hot ,, it's long , but worth the reading , you got sick lines out there no doubt ,,,,,,,,, i like ya rhyming way ,,, you got talent bro ,, just keep on building em ,, but try to make ya line shorter , in order to keep the flow ,, but either way,, with ya rhymes it flows, well, lyrics are wisely used, ,, you got the complexity and the similes, and some good punchlines out there,, so ya ,, keeeeeeeep doin ya staff,,,,,,, wanna here more from ya ,, 9/10

Thanks homey, well the song is 350 bars, I know it's long but I made it that way on purpose. It's an internet project and just had to address all the stuff together. The lines are not that long but I had to put them together in the text so they'd fit, but If you take a closer look you'd see there's like 2 or 3 bars a line. It's actually recorded already but I'm not really happy with it yet so I have to touch it here and there and then I'll release it in the net and then I might work on something else. In general I don't push it much and let it come by itself so I might say I'm a slow writer in a way.
Where are ya from homey?

yeah ,, that's why i said ,, either ways it rhymes,, cuz of the internal rhymes you hev ,,, so ya recordin it , damn ,, sounds,, goood,, once it finished,, dont forget to post it in the audio section ,,,, ,,,, i live in Bahrain ,,

[Slim Zaddy]

yeah ,, that's why i said ,, either ways it rhymes,, cuz of the internal rhymes you hev ,,, so ya recordin it , damn ,, sounds,, goood,, once it finished,, dont forget to post it in the audio section ,,,, ,,,, i live in Bahrain ,,

Bahrain's great but it's too far, I hoped you'd say Italy or something like that cuz I like your style and would definitely have you on my song for 'intro' 'bridge' and 'outro' if you were up to it. I still will keep in touch, keep putting out your stuff man it's hot.

well it's a pleasure for me man ,,, distance never matter,,,,dude,, we still can record something for sue ,, I’m up to it ,, ,,, i will pm you my Msn Address add me ,,

[Enimee]

shit was brilliant great work dawg i really enjoyed this would love to hear it on a track for reall


sick flow. sick lyrics...all around good shit no doubt

[Cheez-It]

This is fucking amazing. I NEED this song.

[sudhanshueminem]

dope shyt
no hook no bullshyt...just lyk the game's 300 bars without an intro

drop da audio asap mayn

peace