X'ed Up- Evil Controls 1st Verse & Bridge

[X'ed Up]

I know this may seem like a little 3 AM-ish but I assured you I tried my best to make this my style with zero Em(though there will always be Shady influence in my raps).

This verse is hot, evil, dark, diabolical just like this beat: [url]:p
http://www.shadowville.com/816/genres/g ... /death-bed[/url]

Yeah, X'ed Up is the devil's long lost name,
With your lives we play a tossing game
My words are each individual evil spirits,
Haunting your mind and your feeble lyrics,
The reason I'm not down in the evil infinite,
Is cause I killed too many people a minute,
Killing bitchy women on a simple daily basis,
I'm the sole reason for murdered baby cases,
Out of all evil, I'm the most merciless goon,
Rape Benet Ramsey and I'll kill hercules soon,
Hitler, J Dahmer, Lilo and Stitch with a Pope,
Saddam Hussein down in a ditch with a rope,
I caused 600 tornados, 59 murders, 1 rape,
And 6 girls burned alive as they sunbathe,
I control this world, every spot and line,
I could make 6:66 an alarm clock time,

This dimension is mine,
Now, it is finally time,
For everyone to die,
Yeah, even you and I,

(Bridge)
Yeah, I can see your scared, scared, scared
But you know that I'm there, there, there
You keep screaming where, where, where
Come in only if you dare, dare, dare

[classthe_king]

You had good flow and alright multis but nothing you said was very interesting. You were just saying generic stuff and it was kind of boring. Look at some of Coleon's stuff for good horror pieces. I liked the last line though.

[X'ed Up]

You had good flow and alright multis but nothing you said was very interesting. You were just saying generic stuff and it was kind of boring. Look at some of Coleon's stuff for good horror pieces. I liked the last line though.

I'll make the 2nd and 3rd verse less generic then.