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Unbreakable

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Unbreakable

Postby Banks » Mar 29th, '10, 06:52

Comments please, what do you think?
Note: This song is not mine, is a brazilian rapper, called Gutierrez :y:


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CHORUS
they will not take me, they will not find me
nothing will make them touch me
see the jungle? I'm from there, of course I will camouflage
nothing will do what they notice me
If I take the throne see ce as it is knowing how to play
this will cause everyone to hatch
nothing will stop me, nothing will control myself
I will shoot anything that moves

VERSE 1
Unbreakable as Willis in Unbreakable
doing my safety always excited to show that I
care much about what I said in the "diss's" (ahh ow)
wait disks, expect the clips and respect who I am
more talk, but do what I do is to have talent
Iky & dichinelo in production, takes the handkerchief
, cries mermo because this is my moment
I have 120 sounds good, wait until the release
on my street, in your street, in Brazil, Mozambique
Cape Verde, Portugal, Angola, Paris and Munich
when several admire is because the feeling is
while assholes talk shit, my shit is chic
my vest bullet proof the war is St. George
create strategies for life in the jungle is my hobby
firearms not reach me, my soul is strong
then the back is dark, I'm angry, then do not fuck

CHORUS

VERSE 2
protected by faith and the work force
from the studio in VR to the house of hell
learning for life, their paths and shortcuts
I have lived sessions incredible silence any sucker
concentrated there on the field, physical and spiritual
made history with my family the real Hip Hop
remember Battle of the Real? traditional real
bum is bad because my style is Brutal
your great eye does not see me but I step forward
your feet are left behind, I told you before
that those tires without running, if the trip pedeu
man, I told you: "Play anything and want massage" (hahaha)
I hunted my way without fear and escaped unharmed
evolving what I laugh, because what I rap is not randomly
and even if some are lost trying to delay my side
I'm still going strong, because my body is Closed

CHORUS

VERSE 3
same shirt worn even flip-flops
taken the same killer who leaves sucker with fear
jungle is activity, im dope on the track
face a terrorist, an anarchist mind
the streets are watching me, I'm from Unbreakable
rather die than live right wrong
the climate of Rio boils the blood cold
asshole loses life walking empty comb
23 years of war saw the bullet eat
23 years of ghetto seeing the blood flow
'm immune to chat who has nothing to say
street poetry is what I have to offer
dodging the bullets, Iky, and Gutierrez Funnk
Whose fault the game falls, return is Jedi
for those who do not know what to say, that shut up
or the application of silence will be the lead point blank ... asshole

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Portuguese [ my language]

CHORUS
eles não vão me levar, eles não irão me achar
nada irá fazer com que eles me toquem
vê a selva? sou de lá, claro vou me camuflar
nada irá fazer com o que eles me notem
se tomo o trono ce verá como que é saber jogar
isso fará com que todos se choquem
nada irá me parar, nada irá me controlar
irei atirar em tudo que se move

VERSE 1
Corpo Fechado como Willis em Unbreakable
fazendo minha segurança empolgo sempre no show que vou
se importam muito com o que eu disse nos "diss's" (ahh ow)
esperem os discos, esperem os clipes e respeitem quem sou
vários falam, mas fazer o que faço é ter talento
Iky & Dichinelo nas produça, toma o lenço
chora, chora mermo porque esse é meu momento
tenho 120 sons bons, aguardem os lançamentos
na minha rua, na sua rua, no Brasil, em Moçambique
Cabo Verde, Portugal, Angola, Paris e Munique
quando vários admiram é porque o sentimento existe
enquanto merdas falam merda, minha merda fica chique
meu colete a prova de bala na guerra é São Jorge
criar estratégias de vida na selva é meu hobby
armas de fogo não me alcançam, minha alma é forte
depois a volta é sombria, tenho raiva, então não fode

CHORUS

VERSE 2

protegido pela fé e pela força do trabalho
desde o studio em VR até a casa do caralho
aprendendo pela vida, seus caminhos e atalhos
já vivi sessões incríveis da calar qualquer otário
concentrado lá no campo, físico e espiritual
fiz história com minha familia o Hip Hop real
lembra Batalha do Real? real e tradicional
vagabundo passa mal porque meu estilo é Brutal
teu olho grande não me vê mas eu passo adiante
teus pés te deixaram pra trás, eu te avisei antes
que quem se cansa sem correr, se pedeu na viagem
cara, eu falei pra você: "Joga nada e quer massagem" (hahaha)
eu caçei o meu rumo sem medo e escapei ileso
evoluindo o que eu rimo, porque o que eu rimo nao é a esmo
e mesmo que alguns se percam tentando atrasar meu lado
eu continuo firme e forte, porque meu Corpo é Fechado

CHORUS

VERSE 3

mesma camisa surrada, mesmo chinelo de dedo
mesma levada assassina que deixa otário com medo
selva é atividade, boladão tô na pista
face de terrorista, mente de anarquista
as ruas me vigiam, eu tô de Corpo Fechado
prefiro morrer certo do que viver errado
o clima do Rio ferve o sangue frio
comédia perde a vida andando de pente vazio
23 anos de guerra vendo a bala comer
23 anos de gueto vendo o sangue escorrer
tô imune a papo de quem não tem nada a dizer
poesia de rua é o que eu tenho pra oferecer
esquivando dos projéteis, Iky, Funnk e Gutierrez
no jogo quem falha cai, retorno é de Jedi
pra quem não sabe o que fala, que cale essa boca
ou o pedido de silêncio vai ser chumbo a queima roupa...cuzão
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Re: Unbreakable

Postby Fa-Q » Mar 29th, '10, 06:57

I can't tell...does it rhyme in the original language...cause I heard that rhymes don't matter in other countries...that its all about...speed, not sure where I heard that :unsure:
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Re: Unbreakable

Postby Banks » Mar 29th, '10, 07:01

Fa-Q wrote:I can't tell...does it rhyme in the original language...cause I heard that rhymes don't matter in other countries...that its all about...speed, not sure where I heard that :unsure:

only rhyme in Portuguese ( original language ), when translated to English, not rhyme, still stands as a common text, right? So give to assess the lyrical artist in the same way :)
you still hear the music? :unsure:
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Re: Unbreakable

Postby Fa-Q » Mar 29th, '10, 07:05

therealbanks wrote:
Fa-Q wrote:I can't tell...does it rhyme in the original language...cause I heard that rhymes don't matter in other countries...that its all about...speed, not sure where I heard that :unsure:

only rhyme in Portuguese ( original language ), when translated to English, not rhyme, still stands as a common text, right? So give to assess the lyrical artist in the same way :)
you still hear the music? :unsure:

It wasn't bad mosdef but the punches were kinda weak imo...idk like the first line could have been so much more creative but it was simplified...
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Re: Unbreakable

Postby Banks » Mar 29th, '10, 07:08

Fa-Q wrote:
therealbanks wrote:
Fa-Q wrote:I can't tell...does it rhyme in the original language...cause I heard that rhymes don't matter in other countries...that its all about...speed, not sure where I heard that :unsure:

only rhyme in Portuguese ( original language ), when translated to English, not rhyme, still stands as a common text, right? So give to assess the lyrical artist in the same way :)
you still hear the music? :unsure:

It wasn't bad mosdef but the punches were kinda weak imo...idk like the first line could have been so much more creative but it was simplified...

What are your favorite lines?
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