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Hail Mary(X Version) J Roc Diss

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Hail Mary(X Version) J Roc Diss

Postby X'ed Up » Apr 4th, '10, 08:58

[Intro]
Rest In Peace Makaveli,
J Roccy,
His wordplay impresses nobody,
Wishing right now he were rotting,

[Chorus]x2
Why diss me,
Motherfucker, like you pop some E
Look at what you did now,
You just pissed of a giant,
Oh,ma,ma,ma,ma,ma,ma,God,

[Verse 1]
I'm a killer cause you pushed me,
Not pissed off but it's time for yo' bitch-ass to see,
Rage and anger unloaded, this diss you better quote it,
In yo' sig, so you keep yo' rhymes from being showboated,
Proud mouth, swear to god, your words gonna push em in,
See Spyder coming for me, Oh my god just, squash him in,
No one will pay attention,
To me, Damn, Roccy, if you go,
TR you'll kill, they need a dick to get on top to blow,
Now all of a sudden your a fucking hard-ass, it seems,
Like Roc, is so hot, on ecstacy, or your dreams,
Acting oh so great, But wait, your so crazy,
Just quit, get off of this trip, someone stop this train,
You say yo' game is light-opted, fuck, man just spit
The fuck, Stop these pathetic excuses, say it's shit,
Saying my motherfucking name for what, I will fuck you up,
Along with these pussies eveywhere fucker, don't say X'ed Up, sucker

[Chorus]x2
Why diss me,
Motherfucker, like you pop some E,
This fucking Gay Roc is soft,
Now, fucker please fuck off,
Bye,bye,bye,bye,bye,bye,bye,bye,bye

[Outro]
Fucking Gay Roc,
Don't excuse your garbage,
Now, fuck off and smoke some weed boi,
Oh and by the way this was lightwork,
Last edited by X'ed Up on Apr 5th, '10, 06:51, edited 2 times in total.
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Re: Hail Mary(X Version) J Roc Diss

Postby J Roc » Apr 4th, '10, 15:15

Haha i guess some people told u some things about me With All tha Ecstacy Refereneces haha ....

Propsss , Some Goood Shit But u just started World War 3 & im dropping tha bomb lil negro ......... :staticsmoking:
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Re: Hail Mary(X Version) J Roc Diss

Postby dR3 » Apr 4th, '10, 21:39

The verse is ok, but wtf were you thinking while writing the hook?
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Re: Hail Mary(X Version) J Roc Diss

Postby FAME » Apr 4th, '10, 21:41

using the word gay as a diss just shows your age....


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Re: Hail Mary(X Version) J Roc Diss

Postby X'ed Up » Apr 5th, '10, 04:59

FAME wrote:using the word gay as a diss just shows your age....


:coffee:

Nas did it :whistle:
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Re: Hail Mary(X Version) J Roc Diss

Postby X'ed Up » Apr 5th, '10, 06:55

dR.dR3 wrote:The verse is ok, but wtf were you thinking while writing the hook?

Fixed it. And only OK? :'(
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Re: Hail Mary(X Version) J Roc Diss

Postby Spyder » Apr 5th, '10, 22:10

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Re: Hail Mary(X Version) J Roc Diss

Postby DƎRDYPK » Apr 5th, '10, 22:11

lol
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Re: Hail Mary(X Version) J Roc Diss

Postby X'ed Up » Apr 5th, '10, 22:12

Spyder wrote::coffee:

I'm ready ;)
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Re: Hail Mary(X Version) J Roc Diss

Postby dR3 » Apr 6th, '10, 00:28

X'ed Up wrote:
dR.dR3 wrote:The verse is ok, but wtf were you thinking while writing the hook?

Fixed it. And only OK? :'(

Yeah, I'm sorry to say it, but you can do much better.
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