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Square Dance( X'ed Diss)

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Square Dance( X'ed Diss)

Postby Spyder » Apr 10th, '10, 04:20

new yet you seemin tough, swallow pills usin needle drugs
But see women aint ‘Hittin X’ like their ‘Screen Is Up’
you seen enough… cause Roc n Spy drop hot, not sublime
and the only way ‘X On Streets’ be them Crossing Signs,
Fuckin Wit Beef youll be Sodomized, you gone fight?
Your text-shame so I dominate ‘X-Games’ like Shaun White.
This Drop Light like overcast, Amber Alert we Missin A Kid
Cause your ‘Pix-are’ for little boys like the Flick In Ya Sig.
Tap, submission I win, you don’t need people you can do it ya self?
Then tell me why you be callin in some dudes to your help…
Try to excel this shit well, I laugh as my experiment it unfolds
This whole place frown at ‘X-Ratings’ like his Parental Controls
if we Square Dance I step on ya toes, youll get tarnished and burnt
all of ‘X-Men’ don’t equal Spyder so you still Marvel My Work.
Saw your pics man, come up in the place like you hot, face it you not
only ‘Straight Tracks’ comin out your mouth be the Braces You Got
you afraid of me dawg, against me you had one week ass punch X
will you respond this time, I cant wait to see what comes next.
Give up kid, become a vet, your lame fat jokes don’t bother me
in Liberty City, your shits ‘Played Out’ like Grand Theft Auto 3
honestly, why don’t you take a glance at the feed that you get
just cause you got respect of ‘the Class’ don’t make you a teachers pet
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Re: Square Dance( X'ed Diss)

Postby Solace » Apr 10th, '10, 04:23

Holy fuck that was hot bro. :worship:

Your punches are really fucking improving.
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Re: Square Dance( X'ed Diss)

Postby GoodGirlsGetGutted » Apr 10th, '10, 04:24

There's some vicious punches in this one alright.
That was one of the better disses I've seen in a while.
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-Matthew 7:12

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Re: Square Dance( X'ed Diss)

Postby Spyder » Apr 10th, '10, 04:25

thanks guys :worship:
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Re: Square Dance( X'ed Diss)

Postby Spyder » Apr 10th, '10, 05:05

Coleon wrote:new yet you seemin tough, swallow pills usin needle drugs
But see women aint ‘Hittin X’ like their ‘Screen Is Up’
set up doesn't make sense, don't get the punch

Try to excel this shit well, I laugh as my experiment it unfolds
This whole place frown at ‘X-Ratings’ like his Parental Controls
filler punch


1. thought the punch was kinda obvious

2. he had a thread about his comp was locked on parentals so its a personal punch

but to each his own and thanks for the feed :b:
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Re: Square Dance( X'ed Diss)

Postby GoodGirlsGetGutted » Apr 10th, '10, 05:08

They're not using ecstacy ("hitting X") because their screens are up and people can look in and catch them doing it.
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Re: Square Dance( X'ed Diss)

Postby Spyder » Apr 10th, '10, 05:37

naw gggg but nice interpretation

hittin X - as in sex
screen is up - the little x you use to close out of the screen


idk i liked it :'(
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Re: Square Dance( X'ed Diss)

Postby GoodGirlsGetGutted » Apr 10th, '10, 05:40

Spyder wrote:naw gggg but nice interpretation

hittin X - as in sex
screen is up - the little x you use to close out of the screen


idk i liked it :'(

That is such a reach.
The punch makes no sense.
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Re: Square Dance( X'ed Diss)

Postby Spyder » Apr 10th, '10, 05:41

good to know
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Re: Square Dance( X'ed Diss)

Postby Arrinef » Apr 10th, '10, 05:42

spyder still got that touch
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Re: Square Dance( X'ed Diss)

Postby Spyder » Apr 10th, '10, 05:44

thanks r
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