5 Minute Quickie; Rhymes Still Just Swift See

[Solace]

At the moment life's a lie to me , what am I to be,
Chest pressed, messed yes, that's why I'm crying jeez,
My lifeline is reaped and I usually hide, I'm weak,
Fuck connections, no siamese, this is sibling rivalry,
Under these pressures I can't even try to breathe,
Without a mic to reach it's quite a fight to preach,
Living's quite a leach when nothing seems nice to me,
Fuck the light, indeed, I'd rather no sights to see,
How you like me now? Got the aim of a marksman,
Flames? I will part them in this game I am startin',
Drain my thoughts, changed, placed into darkness,
Incisions in my brain, crazed, strange, I am heartless,
And see all of this is just how I was made to be,
So calm the advice, there ain't no sane for me,
Just cradle to the grave, give and take to sleep,
I'm just keystyling so I can entertain you cheaps.

[Ticalrecords]

duuude tht was nice man, u changed the rhyme up at the perfect moment i was jus thinkin how long can he keep goin haha. love those internal rhymes especially the mic to reach, fight to preach line. if theres anything wrong with it, its the "aint no sane for me", idk it kind of drops the overall momentum but w/e. its still a nice drop. props

[Solace]

Some good detailed feedback bro, definitely appreciated! Glad you liked it, just a quick one to get my mind working through writers block you know.