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Oh Joy To More Solace

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Oh Joy To More Solace

Postby Solace » Apr 24th, '10, 03:32

I dunno lol. Just trying to see if my technical shit is all there (cept punches o course)

Cryptic writtens, attack you with mechanical spasms,
Just sit and listen or else I'll rip you back to an atom,
Be slit and bit in, fight and get ya mandibles sliced,
Best to take a lesson, read on how this cannibal writes,
See this is an animal fight, and may I stay victorious,
I found personal solace, therefore today is glorious,
Reach in the demon, you never know what's in within,
No need to scare ya just proceed to tear ya limb from limb,
Fuck all bitches, but I don't really hate whores yet,
They leave me bored stiff just like a skateboard deck,
Wack motherfuckers, I'm here to rip this faggotry,
Beat then treat him a mirror to show a bitch in agony,
What is this tragedy? Lines gay with the rhymes same,
So ahead of my time, I ain't even in my time range,
Wait what? Hold on a minute, bitches just stay shut,
Hand me the Mac, shoot it down, ain't gunna make up,
Filler lines to kill the time, acting like this glock is soft?
Then they lose their hardon when I start popping off,
Weaponry, settle beef, sever these unlevel headed creeps,
Who want to better me, we'll go head to head to see,
It's best to be repping me 'gainst these prepubescent geeks,
Typing all day long, calling me names, just testing me,
Trigger me fingers G, watch me test, jest then pull,
Best met you blow, blood flow out of ya testicles,
Don't call me the Dark Knight, I shine like light-day,
Just joking and poking, all these rhymes is lightweight.
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Re: Oh Joy To More Solace

Postby gutawafang » Apr 26th, '10, 04:09

title is wrong. LOL.

the shit you wrote was some gangsta shit, and the last few lines were the best. :y:
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Re: Oh Joy To More Solace

Postby Solace » May 10th, '10, 03:47

Thanks, AGAIN!
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