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Practice verse #3

Postby DƎRDYPK » May 3rd, '10, 06:04

Not as good as the other 2 I did but whatever




here's some words of advice..buy a map or get shit on
you get ripped on, pissed on, dissed on & kicked on
you think you hard? you a joke. little kid get picked on
I rap sicker than most cats when I do this in a quick song
I'm bringing heat like a campfire. biting necks like a vampire
you think your stoned off your ass? well I bet this man's higher
floating on cloud 9 you got that weed well it's about time
I'v been hitting the bong, singing my song, outloud I shout rhymes
writing in my bible of verses as I walk upon the surface
any rapper that was iLLer than me has now become worthless
you serve no purpose so you better leave my planet
the worlds mine, Nas told me so. you hear me god damnit?
I live life how I wanna live, lost in the blunt smoke
I told your girl puff puff pass, now i'm slicing at that cunt's throat
pass the dutchie or believe that imma split you in two
don't fuck wit me while i'm sippin gin & juice dude
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Re: Practice verse #3

Postby gutawafang » May 3rd, '10, 06:28

Another thumb.

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Re: Practice verse #3

Postby DƎRDYPK » May 3rd, '10, 15:53

gutawafang wrote:Another thumb.

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thanks Fish :happy:
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Re: Practice verse #3

Postby Solace » May 10th, '10, 03:35

Pretty good, better than #9 which I just dropped a quickie feed on.

here's some words of advice..buy a map or get shit on
you get ripped on, pissed on, dissed on & kicked on
you think you hard? you a joke. little kid get picked on
I rap sicker than most cats when I do this in a quick song

Was boring but it started to pick the pace up right after those lines bro :y:
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Re: Practice verse #3

Postby DƎRDYPK » May 10th, '10, 03:37

Solace wrote:Pretty good, better than #9 which I just dropped a quickie feed on.

here's some words of advice..buy a map or get shit on
you get ripped on, pissed on, dissed on & kicked on
you think you hard? you a joke. little kid get picked on
I rap sicker than most cats when I do this in a quick song

Was boring but it started to pick the pace up right after those lines bro :y:


Thanks for taking a read bro :b:
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