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Pyromaniacs - Enemies Of Mankind

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Re: Pyromaniacs - Enemies Of Mankind

Postby DƎRDYPK » May 6th, '10, 02:59

You 2 killed it :worship:
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Re: Pyromaniacs - Enemies Of Mankind

Postby classthe_king » May 6th, '10, 03:08

It's Sentus lol, but good looks on your verse :worship:

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Re: Pyromaniacs - Enemies Of Mankind

Postby gutawafang » May 6th, '10, 03:17

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Re: Pyromaniacs - Enemies Of Mankind

Postby Spyder » May 6th, '10, 21:50

cole punches are looking much better, see that you are working on set ups. some were not good but others were pretty nice so i give you props, i wanna see u mix up a rhymescheme or something to differ a piece a bit, but pretty good drop

class sorry but i wasnt feeling this verse at all bro, to me the rhyming was boring and nothing from the verse stuck out. id also like to see u mix your game up a bit, you two write together alot im guessing and its evident when i read, obviously you two are dope. but on a track together its really shown... and thats not always the greatest as it may seem like the weaker one on that collab is just an imitation

no hate to either of you, just what i think from the track and your similarities
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Re: Pyromaniacs - Enemies Of Mankind

Postby GoodGirlsGetGutted » May 6th, '10, 22:18

You both were great as usual, but what's the logic behind your name?
Do to others whatever you would like them to do to you. This is the essence of all that is taught in the law and the prophets.
-Matthew 7:12

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Re: Pyromaniacs - Enemies Of Mankind

Postby Spyder » May 7th, '10, 00:03

Coleon wrote:
Spyder wrote:cole punches are looking much better, see that you are working on set ups. some were not good but others were pretty nice so i give you props, i wanna see u mix up a rhymescheme or something to differ a piece a bit, but pretty good drop

class sorry but i wasnt feeling this verse at all bro, to me the rhyming was boring and nothing from the verse stuck out. id also like to see u mix your game up a bit, you two write together alot im guessing and its evident when i read, obviously you two are dope. but on a track together its really shown... and thats not always the greatest as it may seem like the weaker one on that collab is just an imitation

no hate to either of you, just what i think from the track and your similarities


we've never wrote together tbh, and if you think he's coppin my style you're blind lol (he ain't my Spyder, shout to Roc)

thanks for the feed bro, :b: good looking out


i thought u guys had done pyromaniac penmenship or whatever, and no im not saying hes taking your style, im saying its similar which u yourself have said. and i get that shot but i wasnt doin it to be a dick so whatever :unsure:
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Re: Pyromaniacs - Enemies Of Mankind

Postby classthe_king » May 8th, '10, 15:53

Thanks for all the feed
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Re: Pyromaniacs - Enemies Of Mankind

Postby Solace » May 10th, '10, 03:43

Class, you did amazing on this, you outshined Cole, no offense to him though. Great verses overall I just felt the flow and the technical rhyme sense of Class' best, such smooth transitions and all. Dope stuff.
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