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Practice verse #9

Postby DƎRDYPK » May 6th, '10, 02:50

here I go again working on my shit :wave:




you ain't smoking on that chronic? I think that you in trouble bro
I'm known to roll with derdy kids & drug dealing juggalos
fuck ya click we run this bitch! we all about that loud noise
do we rock the shit or what? mothafucka that's the crowd's choice
i'm better than ever once again with verses for your pleasure
I'll kick this shit forever it gets better with the weather
I stopped writing now I'm back... guess it's better late than never
it feels good to do this once again...PK's a mad professor
I'm trapped in the lab lost in my mind planning destruction
I won't quit till everyone arounds like "oh he busting"
I went from nothing into something got a local crowd who knows me
if your hating or your loving it don't matter it just shows me
I pissed you off, you dug my shit, yip yAp! whatever.....
i build off your love & hate you know it makes me better....
untill I die i'll stay fresh just make sure my grave says
"I did this here for all of yall just play what my tape says"
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Re: Practice verse #9

Postby gutawafang » May 6th, '10, 02:51

i dont like drugs. :n:

the flow is good. :y:
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Re: Practice verse #9

Postby GoodGirlsGetGutted » May 6th, '10, 02:54

"yip yap"?
This gets the job done, I guess.
Do to others whatever you would like them to do to you. This is the essence of all that is taught in the law and the prophets.
-Matthew 7:12

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Re: Practice verse #9

Postby DƎRDYPK » May 6th, '10, 03:05

props on reading :y:
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Re: Practice verse #9

Postby DƎRDYPK » May 6th, '10, 21:15

no more practice verses I already did like 10 of em after a big buzzz of motivation on sunday :y:
Imma try throwing together more pieces :smoking:
get fucked up, throw rhymes together, live life ;)
anyone who wanna get down on some shit wit ya boy hit me up!
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Re: Practice verse #9

Postby Fa-Q » May 6th, '10, 21:19

your flow is always consistently good
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Re: Practice verse #9

Postby classthe_king » May 6th, '10, 21:27

This was dope dude :worship:
Get back to recording
You think your personal attacks make up for what you lack?
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Re: Practice verse #9

Postby Solace » May 10th, '10, 03:33

Fucking bots smh^

It's decent, I think you need to work on your multies 'cause you keep them at 2 syllables most of the time.
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Re: Practice verse #9

Postby DƎRDYPK » May 10th, '10, 03:34

iight I'll keep at it :smoking: :flower:
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