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Rewind (The Return)

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Rewind (The Return)

Postby Solace » May 7th, '10, 04:14

EDIT: Gave it a title, the other one annoyed me to look at.
I'm wondering why it rains as I stay and lay wide awake,
Cry in shame, all of my mess ups, all of my mistakes,
Sky is gray, I better fess up yet I try to hide this pain,
Though the smiles vague, it links to my violent brain,
Twitch, itch to bitch just pondering why I'm this way,
Why I even try, when shouldn't I just go and die today,
But I take a stand, ready steady I wield the patient hand,
The world is my notebook and haters better face it man,
You better go and die, I mastered my flow and rhyme,
Admitted, I'm a bastard, a hazard to all of those at times,
Battled the lone and fake, back when I was grown to hate,
Back when I was rippin' and dissin' as cold as a frozen lake,
Back when I was just a kid, and back when nothing hits,
At me and I cared, back when everyone was muffled spit,
That shit was trouble-ish, now I'm pushin' weapons 'gainst,
My next a kin, best be joking if they think we friends again,
Fear the cheats? The only thing being feared is me,
I tear and beat, stronger than ever man I'd clear the street.
Last edited by Solace on May 10th, '10, 03:44, edited 1 time in total.
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Re: Guess Who's Fucking Back (Again, And Again, And Again?)

Postby DƎRDYPK » May 7th, '10, 04:16

welcome back :wave:
nice verse broski :y:
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Re: Guess Who's Fucking Back (Again, And Again, And Again?)

Postby Solace » May 7th, '10, 04:18

Thanks man, glad you enjoyed. Notice you been dropping a lot of practice verses, will try checking them tomorrow. Weeekend. :y:
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Re: Guess Who's Fucking Back (Again, And Again, And Again?)

Postby classthe_king » May 7th, '10, 20:38

That was great as usually :worship:
You think your personal attacks make up for what you lack?
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Re: Rewind (The Return)

Postby Solace » May 10th, '10, 03:44

Thanks Class :flower:
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