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Methods To My Madness

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Re: Methods To My Madness

Postby GoodGirlsGetGutted » May 7th, '10, 05:04

I came round to take crowns, no Aim, it’s blind rage
ain’t talkin where your eyes stray when I say you guys gaze

Woah!


The fluent diction, I spew and spit’s a new addiction
I talk to get my point a cross like a crucification

*Crucifixion*
And Woah! again.


My flow’s better than veterans, fuck the best contender bra
can’t keep me in Czech.....Republic of Dominica

No!
It's a little nonsensical.


while you look up at the sky to pray to Jesus
I bring the plagues, the diseases, turn this place to a

Turn this place into a... what?

Sick shit, this.
Do to others whatever you would like them to do to you. This is the essence of all that is taught in the law and the prophets.
-Matthew 7:12

-Chaos zawladnal światem po raz kolejny-
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Re: Methods To My Madness

Postby classthe_king » May 7th, '10, 19:36

Punches were crazy with this :worship:
Your wordplay is off the wall
You think your personal attacks make up for what you lack?
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Re: Methods To My Madness

Postby Solace » May 10th, '10, 03:39

Lend me your ear, naw forget it lend me a mic
The things that I write magnified by my windpipe
It’s just right, I just write, keepin’ rhythm in control now
Never slow down, this tempo’s what I know now

a showdown, this beat starts and then I throw down
for the gold crown, but there’s no music in my home town
My flow drowns out the sounds of the passing cars
I dabble bars, me and myself cypher back and fourth

I like to talk, or chat, then turn thoughts to raps
maybe drop a track, so you can converse back
constant wrath in hip-hop is how it hung itself
people think this is thugs with guns and nothing else

and nothing helps, instead of Guru or Lupe
parents hate rap cause of Em, Cube, & Snoop’s slang
a new day, a new place through the clouds are breaching
climb the mountains peak an forget about the town beneath it

what we found is scenic, hip-hop’s final frontier
enjoy the journey, thank you for lending your ear


I only read this, and really liked it. First 4 weren't much, especially to start off a piece but the rest was great bro.
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