Second Chance.

[hype]

[Verse One]
it seems like it was only yesterday
that we loved each other in a very special way
no matter what i say now, you'd never stay.
but to tell you the truth, i never thought that you'd go
away like that and leave me alone freezing on my own.
before you turn me down again listen to this song
'cause it tells you that i'm sorry for everything that i did wrong.
it's really clear to me that in your arms i belong
but it's only up to you to decide if i belong.
i know that i was wrong and you thought that i was strong
but really i was weak, that is why you said goodbye.
that is why in bed i cry on my own again tonight.
if we tried again i'd try to be the best you've ever known
but i'd understand if you just want to be left alone
we don't have to try again, if you want, i'd never phone
and we'd live life on separate roads and girl we'd never know if ..

[Chorus]
we could try again. give it a second chance
we messed up the first time, let's have a second dance.
just take me by the hand, and i'ma give you the world.
i would give you the stars, if you were my girl.
we could try again. give it a second chance
we messed up the first time, let's have a second dance.
just take me by the hand, and i'ma give you the world.
i would give you the stars, if you were my girl.

[DƎRDYPK]

Your writing really reminds me of someone else on here...I can't put my finger on it though
it don't matter ...I thought it was a really nice piece
look forward to reading more from you

[hype]

Your writing really reminds me of someone else on here...I can't put my finger on it though
it don't matter ...I thought it was a really nice piece
look forward to reading more from you

do let me know if you figure out who lol, sounds interesting. thanks for the positive comments.

[hype]

I think you need more multis so as not to make it come off as poetic. Good drop though. Do you write to a beat?

yeah, i wrote this to some random love beat lol. thanks for the feed.

[classthe_king]

I'll feed this because I'm a big Barney Stinson/Neil Patrick Harris Fan

And actually I really liked this. I agree with Coleon about multis but other then that it was top notch. The flow was great and lyrically you showed emotion really well. I really related to it. You have alot of talent so keep writing.

[gutawafang]

It's really my cup of tea. Thank you for sharing. I really really love it.