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Death In The Eyes Of Darkness

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Death In The Eyes Of Darkness

Postby MC Anonymous » May 11th, '10, 20:19

In a place, where the helicopters crash in the dark
in a place where its inhabitants have ravenous barks
where the cannibals are stabbing at hearts
where the animals are grabbing at parts, that's where the savage can start
where the blood dripping streets, every fifty-two weeks
covered with more bodies then the planet with seas
and everybody growing cannabis seeds
and everybody red or they blue like what the fuckin' anaglyph sees
Civilization, splitting the nation
everybody running cause they witness the cave in
Listen to Gabriel, or you listen to Damien
Every human dying by the system they came in
world so Evil that the victim is Satan
People on a steeple cause they quick to be praising
when dark meets darkness, and hearts are breaking
tough people master the art of shaking

In a world so dark and cold.....
without art or soul...
without laws, or rights or codes...
Without people standing with their right to oppose...
It's the dark vs light, and the dark is shown... x2

Humans eating other humans, giving children contusions,
raping, abusing other women, leaving wombs in the ruins..
Optical is shattered from the sight and your losing
every inch of your vision, and the dark is improving..
Watch the serpent slither, the thing quivers,
I shiver, I raise swords and dismember, eat the serpent for dinner
bring mics and attack, and sing right to the track
this thing sliced on the back, it's seems wise to react
a mean mind in the act, he's speaking darker then black
I push your heart to your back, until you start to collapse
when I write I gotta harder offense, in fact
I'm a bartender, pass the fuckin' shot to ya trap
I'm not gonna slack, I'm sicker then the hospital, that's
the fucking truth, in the booth, splitting youth with my raps
This the sanctum of darkness, the beat my carcass
go ahead and try to chase and you will see who is farthest

In a world so dark and cold.....
without art or soul...
without laws, or rights or codes...
Without people standing with their right to oppose...
It's the dark vs light, and the dark is shown... x2
LMFAO@ Brittney, bitch looking worse than a chupacabra mixed with a broken down coyote. You're disgusting ugly, so ugly in fact, my brain simultaneously exploded while processing how bitterly grotesque you look. I would much rather stick ice picks into the walls of my cranium, then stick my dick into your quagmire of a clitoris. You're what would happen if a sperm whale mated with a Godzilla fish..


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Re: Death In The Eyes Of Darkness

Postby GoodGirlsGetGutted » May 11th, '10, 20:24

Incredible.
It's so post apocalyptic and dark.
Do to others whatever you would like them to do to you. This is the essence of all that is taught in the law and the prophets.
-Matthew 7:12

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Re: Death In The Eyes Of Darkness

Postby MC Anonymous » May 11th, '10, 20:28

Thanks guys :worship:
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Re: Death In The Eyes Of Darkness

Postby DƎRDYPK » May 11th, '10, 20:30

nice piece bro :y:
one of my favorites from you fo sho :flower:
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Re: Death In The Eyes Of Darkness

Postby MC Anonymous » May 11th, '10, 20:31

DƎRDYPK wrote:nice piece bro :y:
one of my favorites from you fo sho :flower:

:y: :y: :worship:
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Re: Death In The Eyes Of Darkness

Postby Verses » May 11th, '10, 20:36

Epic atmosphere and setting, pretty amazing artistically.
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Re: Death In The Eyes Of Darkness

Postby Spyder » May 11th, '10, 20:37

love the flow on this, very easy no slip ups from what i saw.
of course nice vocab

good to have u back
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Re: Death In The Eyes Of Darkness

Postby MC Anonymous » May 11th, '10, 20:40

Thank you guys!
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Re: Death In The Eyes Of Darkness

Postby MISSChievous » May 11th, '10, 20:41

This is great. :)
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Re: Death In The Eyes Of Darkness

Postby MC Anonymous » May 11th, '10, 20:44

MISSChievous wrote:This is great. :)

Thank you! Be sure to check the audio stage for my song ''Soliloquy''
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Re: Death In The Eyes Of Darkness

Postby dR3 » May 11th, '10, 21:30

You can't imagine how awesome the picture in my head is.

Brilliant job.
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Re: Death In The Eyes Of Darkness

Postby MC Anonymous » May 11th, '10, 21:32

dR.dR3 wrote:You can't imagine how awesome the picture in my head is.

Brilliant job.

:worship: Thank you
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Re: Death In The Eyes Of Darkness

Postby hype » May 12th, '10, 02:01

tough people master the art of shaking


what does that mean? just out of curiosity.
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Re: Death In The Eyes Of Darkness

Postby gutawafang » May 12th, '10, 02:08

Hello Angel. :wave:

I thought it was very poetic. The right beat will make a good record out of this.

The chorus sounds like "Stay Wide Awake". It's good man. I like when laws get involved. :y:

Best line ever. It's simple but it's damn good:
Listen to Gabriel, or you listen to Damien :worship: :worship: :worship:
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Re: Death In The Eyes Of Darkness

Postby Element. » May 12th, '10, 08:04

Amazing, the flow was really good and one of my fav's from you so far :y:
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