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Practice Verse

Postby MC Anonymous » May 12th, '10, 00:40

Anonymous, synonymous to rocking like a monolith
Flow is old and new like rocket ships that's carved in obelisks
Lyrically on top of this, obvious, I am mechanized
Flow is so syncopated like a heart that never dies
swallow sand then spit glass hallow then a wrist that's
on the arms of Marfan's patient, face it, I can rip raps
Break jaws, spit tracks, wetter then a gym mat
watch as I maintain aim and split wigs back
Lyrically I'm hotter and I kick through the cell
just to leave your body cracked, like the liberty bell
and pull the fucking shotty back, till your shivering, well
I never really gave a fuck about your bickering hell
and if you threaten me again, my fist is quicker to dwell
to your cheek bone, that will leave you quivering well
Dump you in a mineral well, your minimal, your syllables
silly, You're worthless and garbage, can't penetrate this citadel
LMFAO@ Brittney, bitch looking worse than a chupacabra mixed with a broken down coyote. You're disgusting ugly, so ugly in fact, my brain simultaneously exploded while processing how bitterly grotesque you look. I would much rather stick ice picks into the walls of my cranium, then stick my dick into your quagmire of a clitoris. You're what would happen if a sperm whale mated with a Godzilla fish..


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Re: Practice Verse

Postby classthe_king » May 12th, '10, 00:42

That was amazing
You think your personal attacks make up for what you lack?
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Re: Practice Verse

Postby WhatsAnEnigma » May 12th, '10, 00:46

I like the flow of it, very smooth.
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Re: Practice Verse

Postby MC Anonymous » May 12th, '10, 00:50

Thank you guys, just a little verse, was bored, did it in like 10 minutes.
LMFAO@ Brittney, bitch looking worse than a chupacabra mixed with a broken down coyote. You're disgusting ugly, so ugly in fact, my brain simultaneously exploded while processing how bitterly grotesque you look. I would much rather stick ice picks into the walls of my cranium, then stick my dick into your quagmire of a clitoris. You're what would happen if a sperm whale mated with a Godzilla fish..


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Re: Practice Verse

Postby Element. » May 12th, '10, 08:02

Very good, and i like the flow aswell.
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