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Animal Feat. Eminem - Airplanes Part. 3

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Re: Animal Feat. Eminem - Airplanes Part. 3

Postby gutawafang » May 13th, '10, 10:53

I assume you can flow to it. Cuz I couldn't. :sweating:

Well, I think it's quite okay. Lacking some power. It sounds like you copying Eminem directly.
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Re: Animal Feat. Eminem - Airplanes Part. 3

Postby classthe_king » May 13th, '10, 20:02

Half of your lines don't even rhyme
You think your personal attacks make up for what you lack?
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Re: Animal Feat. Eminem - Airplanes Part. 3

Postby Element. » May 14th, '10, 07:49

most of the lines dont rhyme, and the structure is bad.
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