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Strategic Lines

Postby mcZu » May 13th, '10, 21:21

I’m unbeatable, musically compact like The Beatles riding in a beetle
They all rhyming ‘bout tools, as if they’re working in a depot
But we know, it’s all lies, they’re just dull and soft
You murdering is like Queen Latifah in a latex dress, it’s impossible to pull off
Colossal impact, impressive with text, my goal is tough
And the toll is rough, so I’m cruising swift and
Trying to put my profit up without using crucifixion
My position is positioning a mission in a place that y’all are just wishing
To witness with this distance I put up a stance
That’s similar in essence to Shady trying to put up with Stan
I just put up a hand, similar to Hitler, when you ask who’s best
Though I’m sicker, no Killer Bees when I ask who’s next
In line to try to face me, listen, I’ll just test ya
With a bomb on my waist that goes tick tock and battle ya while I’m bumping Ke$ha
Then I’ll ask ya to try and use the terrorist Arab stereotype again
My voice is blessing the Pioneer stereo type; Amen
Best lyricist or best emcee that’s sick yo, types
You can’t win those like typing the wrong install serial type
‘cause I’m a ill as fuck, like an incurable disease of venereal type
"Truth is limitless in its range; if you drop a 'T' and look at it in reverse, it could hurt."
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Re: Strategic Lines

Postby classthe_king » May 13th, '10, 21:23

You're the best you've ever been at punches right now IMO. Keep it up :worship:
You think your personal attacks make up for what you lack?
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Re: Strategic Lines

Postby classthe_king » May 14th, '10, 20:19

Doesn't understand it ^^^^
You think your personal attacks make up for what you lack?
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Re: Strategic Lines

Postby mcZu » May 14th, '10, 22:31

Thanks for checking, Class and Animal.
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Re: Strategic Lines

Postby Spyder » May 16th, '10, 05:28

some punches were alright others were soft imo. i think the wordplay was lacking to your normal standards, that beeing said not bad piece. had a nice flow, i flowed it like Dumb Out for some reason and sounded nice in my head
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