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Thrown Away - Down in the Trenches feat. Zu and Sentus

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Thrown Away - Down in the Trenches feat. Zu and Sentus

Postby Fa-Q » May 28th, '10, 06:41

Thrown Away:
I found an army, they keep their heads, down in the trenches,
Puddles of blood scattered on the land, drowned in the inches,
Empty shells, in the playground, they're found on the benches,
Its Christmas morning, gunshots are the sound of the Grinches,
On both sides of the soaked field, each of the shaky hands kill,
Its almost as if the lonely falling raindrops are at a stands still,
Can you see each of the trees in the forest, the lonely wood rots,
Can you stop the destruction, by thinking only good thoughts,
I hear the soldiers chant, holding up what their shoulders can't,
They say in the most monotonous tone, my shoes have no soles,
Our laces no heart, and each of the muddy grooves have no holes,
Play a chess game every knight, each of my moves have no goals,
Weathered Bibles and Korans grasped, in prayer, four hands clasped,
They tell of their wins and losses columns, of their sins and crosses,
They told me they lost at king of the hill, yet their spirit will sing still,
Their bodies filled with ainst of war, they know how a wasp's stings feel,

The art of war, is not always seen as soon as you, start a war,
The part of gore, filling streets, war is what killing greets,
The art of war, give your heart to more, to see down in the trenches,
I want to make a consensus of the men, down in the trenches,

Sentus:
Bullets rippin flesh grab the gun, pull it, grippin death,
By the throat, say goodbye to hope, knife hit the chest,
Fall back slippin, trippin, hit the mud face first,
Drenched in blood, taste dirt, no fuckin place worse,
The trenches are relentless when the gas blows,
Put the mask low within inches and clench it like a last hope,
Save all of your prayers, there’s no god in this earth,
After each shot is dispersed you’re left to rot in the dirt,
This rock is a curse, I don’t wanna fight another night,
Do it for my mother in the sky and the brother at my side,
Some cover up in fright but I will never fuckin hide,
Let them take in my pride, look em straight in the eye,
It’s amazing that I am still able to push through,
The men dyin and limbs flyin to do what I should do,
I put my entire nation on my shoulders till it cracks,
And I still do it for every single soldier at my back,

The art of war, is not always seen as soon as you, start a war,
The part of gore, filling streets, war is what killing greets,
The art of war, give your heart to more, to see down in the trenches,
I want to make a consensus of the men, down in the trenches,

Zu:
While standing down in the trenches I try to regulate and fabricate,
Any form of light that pierces through and then I separate,
Hope from desperate aspects and segregate while I set a date,
For the escape before I get buried under lies like federate-
Tax rates, rating from a second place to an exaggerated pace,
Exactly there is where I should rest my case, but just in case,
My settings race, I use a set of sedates while I’m stepping based-
On my surroundings, the sound is base and they said ‘we'll sent you in,
I’m there and I’m falling in love with her, what I feel is genuine,
But my emotions are on mute, so how do I know how genuine feels?
I try to enter the center leaving the placenta of contempt I’m in, for real,
So you better defend your thin heels, or I’ll offend your ten wheels‘
Cause I simply navigate to a rapid gate where I close my eyes and levitate,
To a different place, I’m still down in the trenches, though,
I’m standing on a thicker end stage and I frown upon the attention, so
I’m not a parable of a Samaritan, so the edible story becomes food for thought,
Questionable arrogance can actually help you view a roots core caught,
In order for you to be confident enough to climb out of a narrow ditch
‘cause my life sometimes resembles that of a pharaoh's glitched,
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Re: Thrown Away - Down in the Trenches feat. Zu and Sentus

Postby classthe_king » Jun 1st, '10, 00:16

I feel like I held this song down
You think your personal attacks make up for what you lack?
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Re: Thrown Away - Down in the Trenches feat. Zu and Sentus

Postby Fa-Q » Jun 1st, '10, 00:20

classthe_king wrote:I feel like I held this song down

How so?
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Re: Thrown Away - Down in the Trenches feat. Zu and Sentus

Postby classthe_king » Jun 1st, '10, 00:27

Idk, I came pretty weak compared to you guys. I wanted to have an amazing verse but gave up after the first four lines. The first four lines actually took me longer to write then the last 12
You think your personal attacks make up for what you lack?
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Re: Thrown Away - Down in the Trenches feat. Zu and Sentus

Postby Fa-Q » Jun 1st, '10, 00:32

classthe_king wrote:Idk, I came pretty weak compared to you guys. I wanted to have an amazing verse but gave up after the first four lines. The first four lines actually took me longer to write then the last 12

I have had feelings like that where you go back and read it and don't like it. Don't worry your verse was good dude and I liked how it came out...I really wanted yah on this too
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Re: Thrown Away - Down in the Trenches feat. Zu and Sentus

Postby Fa-Q » Jun 5th, '10, 12:33

Bump
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Re: Thrown Away - Down in the Trenches feat. Zu and Sentus

Postby mcZu » Jun 6th, '10, 23:21

Didn't know you posted this. Nice verses guys, it was an honour to work with you guys.

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Postby Fa-Q » Jun 8th, '10, 00:20

Thanks Zu yea this was good
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Postby mcZu » Jun 8th, '10, 21:08

Bump.
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Postby Fa-Q » Jun 8th, '10, 21:58

This is getting sooo overlooked
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Postby mcZu » Jun 13th, '10, 15:59

This is getting slept on like a mattress.
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