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Fuck You

Postby Solace » Jun 8th, '10, 22:00

It's the honest truth even if these lyrics rot my tooth,
Time for me to tell all what I've always thought of you,
Don't owe respect, our ties severed grew loose,
Now I think it's safe to say that I never knew you,
After all these years, seems you grown my enemy,
So I wouldn't care if ya say you don't remember me,
You and friends? Well I hope the lot will choke,
And if I say I don't like you, just note it's not a joke,
You're changing to me, giving me anger, believe,
You've decieved, and now it's just paining to me,
'Cause you read your mind, it's a book of the lies,
And then you read my eyes, it's a look of despise,
In my childhood you always pushed me around,
Made fun of me because I was the rookie in town,
Saying if I died, no one would cry, nothing much,
Keep bleeding out my soul 'til I'm done pumping blood,
It's awful to see, why you even bother talking to me?
No I can't change, I can't be what you want me to be,
Obviously it's taunting to me, ya haunting my dreams,
Expose the fact, just know the rap until honesty bleeds,
It's all just you and me, this falls together beautifully,
Who ever knew how false the truth could be?
You think you're really good? All ya art is bluff,
You never amounted to shit, you ain't smart enough,
Smoking at school, cool? I don't know the flow of you,
You're different everyday, now it's hard to notice you,
Now I'm saying no to you, you're walking through my health,
Only noticed, Shut the fuck up, why am I talking to myself?
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Re: Fuck You

Postby Spyder » Jun 8th, '10, 23:57

im fuckin feelin this, nuff said
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Re: Fuck You

Postby Solace » Jun 10th, '10, 00:30

Thanks bro. :y:
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Re: Fuck You

Postby gutawafang » Jun 10th, '10, 02:03

The words used is good but it does not flow well to me overall. the multis helped a lot though. not bad.
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Re: Fuck You

Postby Solace » Jun 10th, '10, 22:18

Alright bro I'll keep at it and maybe next time you'll enjoy it more. :flower:
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