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64 in 35 mins

Postby gutawafang » Jun 10th, '10, 03:29

Yo
My dog’s the same age as me and it’s growing healthy cuz it lies in the food
That I eat, I ain’t gonna stay short forever like Little Red Riding Hood
I am straight out of the experiment, struck by lightning, I’m Frankenstein
Soldiers tried to kill me, but they too afraid they fucking go back in line
Have you ever walked with a green skin, and yell like you’re a superhero?
Cosplay or whatever? Japanese anime shit, or whatever man, we know
I don’t give a flying fuck, period, but I guess it’s gonna happen again
Because a period isn’t the end, it’s monthly, oh man, I’m rapping again
I’m pointing two fingers at you fellas, because my mouth is stitched
I ain’t smiling but man, why so serious, why don’t we dance just like Stitch?
Yes, that blue alien, I’m talking about it, you’re damn right, dawg
Man, I guess you’re too timid to even stand up when you fight dogs
This is just a bark, pussy, enough with your purring, I’m scarring you
I’ll make a show, just for you gayfucks, yes a show starring you
Motherfuckers, put the mic down, because I’m the Arnold in this game
I said I’ll be back, so now I’m back to terminate you and your fame
How about I take away your everything? Your virginity too?
Man, I know the first few lines of this shit triggered insanity, dude
Don’t try to act cute, you can’t fucking sing with a motherfucking crayon
Ain’t Jigglypuff, you pussy out of generation, I’ma fuck you like Taeyon
Out of generation, yes a fucking gap, wide gap, you need to brace yourself
No wonder you fucking lie through your teeth, a waste of breath
Man, don’t talk to me like you can put out this fire within me, bitches
Fuck it I need the magic lamp, and choose between three wishes
Fuck you genie, I want you to grant me all my wishes, can’t you?
Or else I’ma chop your fucking dick off, hospital I’ma land you
Dammit, where am I? It feels like a huge wave of tension just came into me
And back into these bitches I came, no way I’d go back in the sea
Face it, I ain’t gonna lose, I got a motherfucking mic installed in my throat
That means my words they amplify like they’re in caps, they ain’t no joke
Don’t look at me as if I’m doing shits that fucking floats my boat
Goddammit, I don’t care if yours would sink, I’ma stay fucking afloat
I’m too tired I need my veins to stop stressing itself like it’s an office job
You can’t catch me at all, even if you’re two combined, fucking police-cop
There ain’t nothing that you can drop on me, your bombs’ are all expired
I don’t even need a damn beat to rhyme to, I rhyme as I fucking desire
And I can say fuck like I’m doing it, I can fuck you up, or down, it’s in action
Right or fucking left, depends on your reaction, it’s all about directions
Fucking pussy, I know I’ve hit the spot, you feel the heat of the melted cheese?
The kitchen’s like hell now, don’t nod like you fucking felt it, please
I’m so sick of you, to the point no remedy could cure me, it’s terminal
But I’m confident fucking could heal me, dammit confirm it will
Fuck again, fuck again, goddamn, I’ma show you how I’m fucking you
And I mean UP, till your brains vibrate orgasm, oh it’s free, lucky you
Whatever, I don’t care, I’d walk away like a stray cat when it’s given food
I’m still fucked up and I’m showing you it’s still the same any given mood
Realize even Wolverine can’t make me bleed, because I stole Ironman’s suit
Mankind should give up when I spit this, cuz it’s like the loss of the entire manhood
Fuck it, you won’t give up? You think you’re Spiderman in a cage match?
You think this is double W E? You think it’s a motherfucking stage set?
I ain’t acting here, I’m pissed off at you, I’ma hurl piss off at you
My cannon, twinshots, fuckers there ain’t no peace for all of you
I hate you, these are the only words that would summarise how I killed you
I didn’t just scar you assholes, I burned you, fucking thick skin, I peeled you
Peelfresh, makes juice out of you, cherry juice, fruit punch fucking good
I’ma serve my fucking guests, see I fucked you so much it’s become so rude
Grab your nutsack, because I’m gonna slice it in half, fusing with your buttcrack
Oops I forgot, it’s your vagina that I’m fucking, pussies, it sucks bad
It ain’t about the hate, it’s all about the way I fucking express like a slogan
My knife’s faster than your machine gun bullets, because yours is a slow gun
The point is, the aliens are going to invade this planet and kidnap a few of us
I don’t want either of us to be one of them, so might as well settle the dispute in us
Blah, fuck you bitch, I hate you more than the number of times I fucking bleed
Bleed thanks to you, like a disease your period spreads to me, yes indeed
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Re: 64 in 35 mins

Postby MC Anonymous » Jun 10th, '10, 03:39

Damn, sick shit for what it was. Read it all, the flow was ehh, but the rhyming was good and some punches was good. A lot of filler, however. Good job, I didn't expect this from you.
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Re: 64 in 35 mins

Postby gutawafang » Jun 10th, '10, 03:41

MC Anonymous wrote:Damn, sick shit for what it was. Read it all, the flow was ehh, but the rhyming was good and some punches was good. A lot of filler, however. Good job, I didn't expect this from you.

i admit I fucked the flow.

thanks a lot for the feed man. :happy:
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Re: 64 in 35 mins

Postby macdaddy019967 » Jun 10th, '10, 08:52

for this being done in 35 min its good
reminds me a bit of "underground " style
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Re: 64 in 35 mins

Postby gutawafang » Jun 10th, '10, 10:42

macdaddy019967 wrote:for this being done in 35 min its good
reminds me a bit of "underground " style

blahahahahahaa! thanks for reading homie. :)
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