Expectation / The Final Answer

[ShaBruv]

I'm new to this so dont hate, much, i did post some old creative writing material under the name ShadyBruvaz but i feel this is my best piece, so far only 1st verse and chorus i'll add others if people like it.
This is to Imortal Techniques Point of no return, and i spit it with a fast flow
Oh and btw the way thats a homage, im not biting


Expectations on my shoulders, like boulders, my bsak is foldin'
Shoulder blades erodin' from this heavy load i'm holdin,
Life goes much too slow and everyday i'm growing cold 'n'
Now i'm stuck self loathing, but fuck it i'll stop the scoldin'
I'm gettin where i want, fuck those who stop me and the haters
Cuz my goals are so high i'm gon' need escalators
Fuck the undecided, divided, and debators
Can't follow in my footsteps , but you can step in my crators
Now i'm rolling with Lewis and of course there's Justin Kanzah
Its he who approves my verse when i begin to bust my stanzah
I dont have much cash but soon i'll hit the bonanza
I aint a millionaire but fucker this is my final answer,

I'm a do something, of which i can be proud
Staring into space i wish my nan could see me now
I prayed for a change, thank you lord that change has come
I'll stay and rap for my life, i'ma prove myself son
I can easily now exceed my expectations

[SoldierShady]

[DƎRDYPK]

I was reading this to the instrumental & it goes together pretty well
keep it up

[ShaBruv]

I was reading this to the instrumental & it goes together pretty well
keep it up

yeah thankyou except the chorus though

[TheKanza]

:coffee:

let's see what u can do then

[neversnooze]

i liked it , excluding your chorus. not much to really say other than the middle part of your verse was short, could have been longer and evened out with the other bars.

[gutawafang]

The flow is good man, thanks to the multis I assume. LOL. Nice one man. The title is not good though. LOL.

[SoldierShady]

:coffee:

let's see what u can do then

[ShaBruv]

:coffee:

let's see what u can do then

Lol