Wish She Never Left

[Spyder]

She has got up and run, the love of my life
Sprinted such a distant til nothings in sight
My number one fright to simply lose her again
Try to maneuver her when, I ended bruised and im pinned
How could she do it again, I gave her the world
I simply cant explain how much I changed for this girl
Now down the drain it all swirls, in an instant its gone
In this submission when did it go wrong?
This isnt a song its my life tryin get it right and im doomed
Couldn’t she have spent one more night in this room?
Was it the words that I said, fogging your mind
So now my words going downhill like the Hollywood sign.
I get caught up sometimes cause im a servant at work
Sixty hours a week has got me urging to burst.
And im sure that it hurts just put your trust on my word
Don’t listen to your friends baby fuck what you heard
Ive had enough of this world, gossip of my mistakes
I try to block it but I cant stop it cause its fate.
Karma has come around now im down on my knees
And your frowning listening to the sound of my pleas
My heart pounds as it beats like thousands of feet
Of the broken hearted, crowding the streets
I bow to defeat as you say were not continuing on
And watch you walk away as I try to sing you this song.

[nickolas_warner]

Not bad!

[gutawafang]

Better than Drakes whole album!!!

DOPE!!!

????? LOL


I see some multis but the syllables aren't played around much. Flow's not too good man, in my opinion. For the title, I expected a little more, since you're Spyder.

But man, it's quite good. Seems like you're just leting it out.

[Spyder]

hah thanks guta

kinda a stop and go flow on this one

[Spyder]

buuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuump

[Junky]

Nice, i'm really feelin it.

[Spyder]

thanks