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On The Rise

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On The Rise

Postby Liquid_Fangs » Jun 11th, '10, 22:38

I write a bit more mellow than most Em fans haha, here's something rough and unfinished off of my next mixtape

Mountains arise but I’ll struggle and climb
To the top of the summit, never plummet, I’m fine
and if I do, yo, I’ll just spelunk with my crew
that underground sound, yeah we be tunneling through
stay looking for jewels, my tools are just spoke rhymes
coming out with coal, though I’m searching in a gold mine
work and stay on grind to reach my caliber
bored of games with snakes, you mind if I take the ladder up?
I’m climbing rungs, fall but I advance still
if this style’s done, I’ll just throw it in the land fill
Every mile sprint, so I can get up on this damn hill
made of blood and sweat, that shit you can’t build

written to the instrumental Concerto De La Muerto Produced By EOM for Wax
Ignorance is bliss and man I wish I was dumb
Cause mistakes are always hard to forget when you're young
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Re: On The Rise

Postby Just Silver » Jun 11th, '10, 22:40

Good shit right here :8) srry that i was a dick earlier

but i can dig the concept
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Re: On The Rise

Postby Liquid_Fangs » Jun 12th, '10, 16:59

Thanks bro, it's cool
Ignorance is bliss and man I wish I was dumb
Cause mistakes are always hard to forget when you're young
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Re: On The Rise

Postby classthe_king » Jun 12th, '10, 18:09

Dope rhymes dude, keep at it :y:
You think your personal attacks make up for what you lack?
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Re: On The Rise

Postby Liquid_Fangs » Jun 12th, '10, 19:30

classthe_king wrote:Dope rhymes dude, keep at it :y:


Thanks man
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Cause mistakes are always hard to forget when you're young
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