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Short and Violent

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Short and Violent

Postby Just Silver » Jun 12th, '10, 20:06

You got a joker face a gamble with some led
Thousand for the body 10 "pounds" for his head
Around do for dead, due to death ,shoot the bed
Wrap you in a comforter, plan on where im dumping ya
Down a river ,lake or stream, shiver shake and bleed through seams in your jeans
Dreams that you speak may not happen again, Audience in my hand will clap till you bend
Curtains down, givem a wash, bloodstained stage crickets and coughs
Sun mid-range at the century of ours, If you cant maintain we be gettin it hot
Stressin bout weapons you got, step in the section get caught
Rep a direction of soft, deafened from essence assaults
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Re: Short and Violent

Postby Liquid_Fangs » Jun 12th, '10, 20:12

Good rhymes and punches but ehhhh on the content. I feel like I've read and heard that verse a thousand times.
Ignorance is bliss and man I wish I was dumb
Cause mistakes are always hard to forget when you're young
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Re: Short and Violent

Postby Just Silver » Jun 12th, '10, 20:14

Liquid_Fangs wrote:Good rhymes and punches but ehhhh on the content. I feel like I've read and heard that verse a thousand times.

usually when i key i end up psycho topics :sweating: :b:
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