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For The Glory

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For The Glory

Postby Liquid_Fangs » Jun 13th, '10, 17:44

The other people in the CW inspired me to write this. The third 4 lines are where it switches up to a quick flow for a second.



Beastie, Run DMC, Newcleus, EMPD
at 6 you’d see me in my dad’s car bobbing distinctly
to the beat, the kicks, the drums, the snares and the claps
tearing plastic off of CD’s that were first minted in wax

the kid in the class, teaching his friends about The Message
older and stressing, this jungle can’t make me plunge to depression
young and was wreckless....until I found my way
I once thought I was helpless....but stars are born everyday

never stray from my path to glory
came in this game, like statutory
rape, I’m crazed, it’s a habit forming
each take I lay is an addict’s story

and the pad before me, once my pen is capped
will be filled to the brim with my story, can you picture that?
and yo I’m giving back, so once these lights fade
I can stop my grind by the time my hair is light grey
Ignorance is bliss and man I wish I was dumb
Cause mistakes are always hard to forget when you're young
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Re: For The Glory

Postby Spyder » Jun 13th, '10, 18:39

pretty dope man, your writing and style is familiar to me :whistle:
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Re: For The Glory

Postby Liquid_Fangs » Jun 13th, '10, 18:46

Well I used do write like battle style like

my GLOCK CLIPS are known to COCK SPIT and BLOW DOMES
MORE than a WHORE with large tits and NO CLOTHES

but I grew up and started doing audio so had to change all that

thanks man :y: I'll feed that long as song eventually
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Cause mistakes are always hard to forget when you're young
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