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Knock U out (Gvdz Disss)

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Knock U out (Gvdz Disss)

Postby J Roc » Jun 15th, '10, 17:29

Hope ur Happy Son , U Straight Bitched Out Now We Gotta Battle Guns
I'll Blow-Tha-Fifth so When u See Those 'Smokin-Cigs' u don't even need to Ask For one!
He's Comatose! Jokin-Bitch He Only Smokin-Cigs But He'll Still Overdosed
Ohhh-We-Know His Relationship? He On Some E-Dating-Shit Getting E-motional
Cyber Sex Ur Reading Some boobs??? Ur Always "Talking big" Like ur Penis is Huge
>the Only Real Life bitch u Could Pull .. Realised That And Cheated on you<...!
Just Leave it To J, To Be a Meanie Today... Cuz U Ain't a Badass i don't Believe Whut U Say
U Cry All-Of-The-Time, Honestly-Why Is there a 'G' In Ur Name ???
My Question To You Sir : Would u do Weed If it Was For Medical Tumours?
Nope! 'Tr Groups' Are The Only Time He's a 'Registered User' !
Dun like Arabs? Stupid Fucker.. When are u gonna learn u can't Choose Ur Color?
U'll Hate Ur Cab-Ride When Theres An 'Arab By' Like Jewish Culture (A Rabi)


U Lost The Best Girl Ur Gonna Get Ma Son ... Alll Cuz U Bitched Up And Signed Off Crying Over Bullllshit Everyday. Peace
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Re: Knock U out (Gvdz Disss)

Postby gvdz » Jun 15th, '10, 18:20

wow impressive :y:
i never said i dont like arabs though.
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Re: Knock U out (Gvdz Disss)

Postby MC Anonymous » Jun 15th, '10, 18:42

J roc wrote:Hope ur Happy Son , U Straight Bitched Out Now We Gotta Battle Guns
I'll Blow-Tha-Fifth so When u See Those 'Smokin-Cigs' u don't even need to Ask For one!
He's Comatose! Jokin-Bitch He Only Smokin-Cigs But He'll Still Overdosed
Ohhh-We-Know His Relationship? He On Some E-Dating-Shit Getting E-motional
Cyber Sex Ur Reading Some boobs??? Ur Always "Talking big" Like ur Penis is Huge
>the Only Real Life bitch u Could Pull .. Realised That And Cheated on you<...!
Just Leave it To J, To Be a Meanie Today... Cuz U Ain't a Badass i don't Believe Whut U Say
U Cry All-Of-The-Time, Honestly-Why Is there a 'G' In Ur Name ???
My Question To You Sir : Would u do Weed If it Was For Medical Tumours?
Nope! 'Tr Groups' Are The Only Time He's a 'Registered User' !
Dun like Arabs? Stupid Fucker.. When are u gonna learn u can't Choose Ur Color?
U'll Hate Ur Cab-Ride When Theres An 'Arab By' Like Jewish Culture (A Rabi)


U Lost The Best Girl Ur Gonna Get Ma Son ... Alll Cuz U Bitched Up And Signed Off Crying Over Bullllshit Everyday. Peace

:laughing: :laughing: :laughing: :laughing: GVDZ WAS THE ONE DATING EMBM!?!!?!?! :laughing: :laughing: :laughing:
LMFAO@ Brittney, bitch looking worse than a chupacabra mixed with a broken down coyote. You're disgusting ugly, so ugly in fact, my brain simultaneously exploded while processing how bitterly grotesque you look. I would much rather stick ice picks into the walls of my cranium, then stick my dick into your quagmire of a clitoris. You're what would happen if a sperm whale mated with a Godzilla fish..


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Re: Knock U out (Gvdz Disss)

Postby BILI » Jun 15th, '10, 18:43

Its dope man,som dope puns and rhymes were more then decent :y:

But whats the beef about?
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Re: Knock U out (Gvdz Disss)

Postby J Roc » Jun 15th, '10, 20:18

J roc wrote:Hope ur Happy Son , U Straight Bitched Out Now We Gotta Battle Guns
I'll Blow-Tha-Fifth so When u See Those 'Smokin-Cigs' u don't even need to Ask For one!
He's Comatose! Jokin-Bitch He Only Smokin-Cigs But He'll Still Overdosed
Ohhh-We-Know His Relationship? He On Some E-Dating-Shit Getting E-motional
Cyber Sex Ur Reading Some boobs??? Ur Always "Talking big" Like ur Penis is Huge
>the Only Real Life bitch u Could Pull .. Realised That And Cheated on you<...!
Just Leave it To J, To Be a Meanie Today... Cuz U Ain't a Badass i don't Believe Whut U Say
U Cry All-Of-The-Time, Honestly-Why Is there a 'G' In Ur Name ???
My Question To You Sir : Would u do Weed If it Was For Medical Tumours?
Nope! 'Tr Groups' Are The Only Time He's a 'Registered User' !
Dun like Arabs? Stupid Fucker.. When are u gonna learn u can't Choose Ur Color?
U'll Hate Ur Cab-Ride When Theres An 'Arab By' Like Jewish Culture (A Rabi)


U Lost The Best Girl Ur Gonna Get Ma Son ... Alll Cuz U Bitched Up And Signed Off Crying Over Bullllshit Everyday. Peace


Lightwork.

i Knew i was forgetting something ... :staticsmoking: ...

BILI wrote:But whats the beef about?


Dude was always trippin at his Ex-E-Girl , Making Her Sad .... Etcetera Etcetera. Just Thought I'd Steer Him In The Right Direction, Since He Dunt Know How To Treat a Girl Right :coffee:

Thanks For Reading & Feeding Everyone.
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