Im The Devil! (FEED)
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Re: Im The Devil! (FEED)
by theJFKshow » Jun 24th, '10, 22:00
It seemed like you were rhyming just for the sake of rhyming.
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Re: Im The Devil! (FEED)
by tjb » Jun 24th, '10, 22:43
did you write this to the beat of wont back down?? thats just what i got out of it.
super superficial but not to bad
super superficial but not to bad
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lets get this track to number 1!
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Re: Im The Devil! (FEED)
by Fa-Q » Jun 25th, '10, 00:39
Not bad man, the structure could use some tweeking and the lines are a bit too long for me to flow well but that doesn't mean anything, just means I can't get the flow...good drop
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