going through changes, first written ever for me

by **shadddyaftermatth** » Jun 19th, '10, 23:17

(intro)
yeahh, im going through changes, time for a new approach to life, lets goo!

(verse 1 )
I'm trying to bust up out of this vault,
staying out of trouble, making sure to stay within orders of the law,
avoiding brawls, i keep fucking trying to tell myself it ain't my fault
i know i am lien, time to make a change,
avoid the pains, keep out of handcuffs and all the chains.
homie next time i will hold back, time to refrain
pick up the effort, and withstand myself from switching lanes,
nah never, homie not once agane.
lord help me move on with my life and stop with these games
lifes to short, i needa take care of my family
i love you mom , i love you dad,
i never meant to be so bad
now i am left with these pains, i'm so sore and sad.
its just now im restarting coming back with everything i never had..

(verse 2)
justin dog, thanks for always being there through the tough times and adversity
homie i never coulda handle all this shit without you personally
i just wish these haters would get on with there lives and make like stairs and get to steppin
dog if these people think they could hold me down, they must be trippin
now that im going through changes
nothin can stop me im ragin
so its time to get to flippin through these pages
and hop up on the stage and get to wrippen on the mic
(unfinished)

by **slimsoxshady** » Jun 19th, '10, 23:21

theres a creative writing section
viewforum.php?f=24

by **shadddyaftermatth** » Jun 19th, '10, 23:22

slimsoxshady wrote:theres a creative writing section

who cares , post the shit anywhere thats wat every1 does plus this isnt creative

by **Just Silver** » Jun 19th, '10, 23:22

Needs a little structure help but it would be better with a new title (Think about it)

Overall Its a concept that is a little different around here, and as a whole you show potential

Good shit :y:

Wrong Section though people will stress this not that I really G.A.F :8)

by **shadddyaftermatth** » Jun 19th, '10, 23:23

Just Silver wrote:Needs a little structure help but it would be better with a new title (Think about it)

Overall Its a concept that is a little different around here, and as a whole you show potential

Good shit
Wrong Section though people will stress this not that I really G.A.F

i need help with structure lol , but thanks first written song il get better

by **slimsoxshady** » Jun 19th, '10, 23:26

shadddyaftermatth wrote:
slimsoxshady wrote:theres a creative writing section

who cares , post the shit anywhere thats wat every1 does plus this isnt creative

everyone else gets their topics moved by mods
and yes, this is creative

by **shadddyaftermatth** » Jun 19th, '10, 23:33

slimsoxshady wrote:
shadddyaftermatth wrote:
slimsoxshady wrote:theres a creative writing section

who cares , post the shit anywhere thats wat every1 does plus this isnt creative

everyone else gets their topics moved by mods
and yes, this is creative

can u just tell me if u liked it instead of saying the topics wrong. sorry i didnt kno were to put it we alll make mistakes calm down

by **slimsoxshady** » Jun 19th, '10, 23:34

shadddyaftermatth wrote:can u just tell me if u liked it instead of saying the topics wrong. sorry i didnt kno were to put it we alll make mistakes calm down

i'm not gonna read it

by **Just Silver** » Jun 19th, '10, 23:34

slimsoxshady wrote:
shadddyaftermatth wrote:can u just tell me if u liked it instead of saying the topics wrong. sorry i didnt kno were to put it we alll make mistakes calm down

i'm not gonna read it

damn thats sort of fucked he didnt really purposely fuck it up

by **shadddyaftermatth** » Jun 19th, '10, 23:36

Just Silver wrote:
slimsoxshady wrote:
shadddyaftermatth wrote:can u just tell me if u liked it instead of saying the topics wrong. sorry i didnt kno were to put it we alll make mistakes calm down

i'm not gonna read it

damn thats sort of fucked he didnt really purposely fuck it up

whatever dicks gonna be a dick but oh well idc

by **Robot** » Jun 19th, '10, 23:52

shadddyaftermatth wrote:
slimsoxshady wrote:theres a creative writing section

who cares , post the shit anywhere thats wat every1 does plus this isnt creative

by **shadddyaftermatth** » Jun 19th, '10, 23:53

Robot wrote:
shadddyaftermatth wrote:
slimsoxshady wrote:theres a creative writing section

who cares , post the shit anywhere thats wat every1 does plus this isnt creative

well yea i created it so im dumb :facepalm2