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The God's Parliament Of Metaphors And Similes

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The God's Parliament Of Metaphors And Similes

Postby MC Anonymous » Jun 22nd, '10, 17:28

Lyrically you battle me brother?
You have a better chance cumming sperm cells identical to each other
now watch as I shatter the page
I leave your mandible cracked, with more blades, then Wesley Snipes in the days
where the movies had approriate plots
I'm open minded, I blew my brains out of the box
Disasterous with lyrics I say
A slithering snake, break your face, wishpering demonic brigades
down to earth like tectonic plates
hypnotic brain waves manipulating molecules, repolish they state
and turn the atoms to a positive shape
the same size as the bullets from the gun that shot 50 cent's face
and lift them all like the neo from matrix
so many shots, then the scenes of Titanic, see through they faces
pray for detectives in there
to get charged, get a full metal suit and sit in electrical chair
I'm a monster like leviathian bitch
with iron picks on my wrist, mining gold with the tip of my dick
Anonymous is lyrically Hard-Core
You wanna fight with words? Pull swords outta mouth, this bar war
You talking like I'm weaker then you
but I'm strong enough to split a fucking atom in two then shatter it too
thee equivilant of gravity inside of a black hole
militant that actually resides with a black robe
So massive if your next to me your time will slow down
when you spit a line, I just rhymed a whole round
Never throw away what I hand you
isn't it ironic that a fucking paraplegic can't stand you
mad enough to pick up atlas while he's holding the planet
then throw them to the sun till it swoll and disbanded
use my eyes to pierce a hole through the granite
stretch a body with my gravity till soul is expanded folded then handed
To Hades for the price of a sick thought
I never even knew what type of wicked fucking rhyming that this brought
Ravage you with armies of leeches
look up to the sky, make it rain, blood parting the beaches
look at me it's hardly a secret
I'll punch you in the face till it looks like it's part of your features
darker then the bottoms of oceans
brain spins faster then a helicopter's rotary motions
herion in veins like catwoman in mine shafts
show you what it's like to be put on a right path
Giant, so I did what is in
my capability and used a motherfuckin' giant squid as a pen
Broken bottles, crystal balls,
broken thoughts, spoken thought, lyrically I open up, wormholes with my thought
Punchlines push your sternum back
level out a field with the pressure of the sun and truly make the fuckin' surface flat
When I rap I know what they stare at
they looking at my chest, cause my lungs both resemble an air bag
'nonymous is writing his heart sick
give you brute force like computers with a bomb on it's hard disk
illest from the top to the bottom
quick enough to be in rain, look at every single droplet and dodge em
with my mind, man I'm closing my brain
blood rushing fast enough to cause erosion in veins, explosions of pain
everybody knows that he sells
only person who is sick with infinite number of T cells
LMFAO@ Brittney, bitch looking worse than a chupacabra mixed with a broken down coyote. You're disgusting ugly, so ugly in fact, my brain simultaneously exploded while processing how bitterly grotesque you look. I would much rather stick ice picks into the walls of my cranium, then stick my dick into your quagmire of a clitoris. You're what would happen if a sperm whale mated with a Godzilla fish..


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Re: The God's Parliament Of Metaphors And Similes

Postby DƎRDYPK » Jun 22nd, '10, 17:34

Best part of my day = you sharing this with me :flower: :worship:
"paraplegic can't stand you" is still my favorite part
along with the mining gold line :smoking:

very very dope :y:
keep at it killa
Imma go scream @ the sun :wave:
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Re: The God's Parliament Of Metaphors And Similes

Postby BILI » Jun 22nd, '10, 17:37

Wow that was mad dope homie,I mean everything was :worship:
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Re: The God's Parliament Of Metaphors And Similes

Postby MC Anonymous » Jun 22nd, '10, 17:39

:worship: :worship: :worship: :worship: :worship: Thanks both.
LMFAO@ Brittney, bitch looking worse than a chupacabra mixed with a broken down coyote. You're disgusting ugly, so ugly in fact, my brain simultaneously exploded while processing how bitterly grotesque you look. I would much rather stick ice picks into the walls of my cranium, then stick my dick into your quagmire of a clitoris. You're what would happen if a sperm whale mated with a Godzilla fish..


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Re: The God's Parliament Of Metaphors And Similes

Postby mcZu » Jun 22nd, '10, 17:49

I like this 'cause you changed your rhyme scheme. And you managed to up your wordplay. Finally, a good Anonymous piece. Not that your other pieces were bad, but you know, the momentum was stagnated. But now you've managed to step it all up.
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Re: The God's Parliament Of Metaphors And Similes

Postby WhatsAnEnigma » Jun 22nd, '10, 18:26

This is amazing, and the rhyme scheme is nice too.
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Re: The God's Parliament Of Metaphors And Similes

Postby MC Anonymous » Jun 22nd, '10, 18:30

Thanks dudes! :D
LMFAO@ Brittney, bitch looking worse than a chupacabra mixed with a broken down coyote. You're disgusting ugly, so ugly in fact, my brain simultaneously exploded while processing how bitterly grotesque you look. I would much rather stick ice picks into the walls of my cranium, then stick my dick into your quagmire of a clitoris. You're what would happen if a sperm whale mated with a Godzilla fish..


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Re: The God's Parliament Of Metaphors And Similes

Postby Fa-Q » Jun 23rd, '10, 15:57

Great piece Annon...didn't have great structure but this sounded like fire...great vocab and overall great drop...keep this up
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