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Eh, rejected

Postby gutawafang » Jun 25th, '10, 02:57

Rejection, it feels as if your heart’s been pierced by a knife
Paying her you give your fucking tears as a price
Surprise life, you’ve had enough, so the world ends
You ain’t God, you ain’t got love from your girlfriend
But you ain’t attached, that’s why you confessed
You were obsessed, you insist that she’s been just
Unjust to you, you can’t adjust to the change of attitude
You couldn’t care less, you don’t show no fucking gratitude
Desires undress, blow up the blown up matter, with helium, expands
I’m down with my cigarettes again, maybe valium, depends
Still matters because it feels like a gun on my lips
I loved you, but now I’m fucking done with my scripts
All I have to do is to submit myself, to God or Cerberus
I still feel ripped apart, this shit does not just unravel us
I just wanna love you, why can’t you accept it like a compliment?
Rejection, but you love me still, bitch, oh yes, I’m so confident

It’s so painful, even the scars have fucking scars on it
But it makes me glad, it’s exaggerated-fucking-ironic
I wanna lay all this hurt, everyday I feel hurt
Killed by these words that stay, don’t you fucking desert
I’ve given up giving up, so yes, I’m still fighting for you
Rejection makes me stronger in my liking for you
Do you understand me? Fuck the flow for a moment
I don’t have to rap just to know that it’s open
For improvement, it’s what I need, I need to prove to you
Initially I wanted to make this romantic and soothing too
But you know, I don’t give a fuck since it’s obvious rejection
Then I shall put your name here, with humorous injection
But I stay out of needles, I’d rather have a double-barrel to my face
I’m in the middle of a trouble, several would’ve chased
Fuck it, it’s just to rhyme, I know you don’t give a fuck too
You made me this way, bitches, here’s a big FUCK YOU

The name you probably missed, nah, I forgot how to spell it
The world is blind to not have seen my psycho acts, they
Probably ignored me, they don’t see what’s before them
The world is just an adventurous bitching whore camp
Fuck the world, period, I’m so tired of living in it
Fuck the trees, fuck the mountains, fuck the air, we don’t need it
I don’t care, fuck everything, it’s all thanks to your rejection
I’m screwing up every potential relationship in my tension
Just for attention, I’m the whole section of the middle finger portion
Fuck the population, fuck civilization, fuck the Organisation
I feel like the product of waste, thanks to you bitch
I blame everybody, yes I’m as cold as your Mitsubishi fridge
I don’t need love, I will love myself only, I’m tired of saying this
I’m tired of saying this, I’m tired of saying this
Can’t you love me? On second thoughts, I want you to love me
Please I need you, bitch I plead you, I promise you I’m worthy

written in 34 minutes.
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Re: Eh, rejected

Postby Fa-Q » Jun 25th, '10, 03:11

As a piece, great flow and vocab...as a song...fuckin great, great message I mean everyone knows girls can be emotional but guys aren't allowed to be...man fuck bitches...great drop
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Re: Eh, rejected

Postby gutawafang » Jun 25th, '10, 03:14

Fa-Q wrote:As a piece, great flow and vocab...as a song...fuckin great, great message I mean everyone knows girls can be emotional but guys aren't allowed to be...man fuck bitches...great drop

haha. thanks man for checking it out man. :flower:

yeah, I confirm Narcissist now. :)
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Re: Eh, rejected

Postby Solace » Jun 28th, '10, 04:36

Fucking great work Fish, you always dropping bombs on the heartfelt stuff. You DO have a great vocabulary, lyrically I felt the first verse was best yet the others carried the meaning further. :y:
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Re: Eh, rejected

Postby gutawafang » Jun 29th, '10, 01:47

Solace wrote:Fucking great work Fish, you always dropping bombs on the heartfelt stuff. You DO have a great vocabulary, lyrically I felt the first verse was best yet the others carried the meaning further. :y:

Thank you very very much. :)
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