Stronger

[MoltenMetalMan]

Just a little something made quick for audio.

Beat: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zX-QuTzB ... re=related

(Verse)
I’m turning pipe dreams into a pipe bomb
Channeling my thoughts into my right arm
Man handle any beat, that I write on
so pull open the curtains, turn the lights on

life gave me lemons, so life long
I’m gonna squeeze these fuckers like a python
constrict with mic chords, and hot lines
until dead or alive I’m up in that top five

end it in my prime, yeah I’ll do it while I’m young
cause if I go past it, I’ll cut out my tongue
nothing was done, for me, still feeling hungry see
learned how to stomach beats, then started crunchin feats

if you got guts to speak, you’re gonna go far
on the road to riches, come along hop in the car
no regards for y’all, so when I’m droppin a bar
no body guards...I’m takin a shot at the stars

(Chorus)

(Verse)
any enemy army that wanna injure me
come and test and learn a little about history
the new Waterloo, for you, different century
adversary fall in awe to my symphony

you ain’t killing me, immortality complex
stronger rhythmically, wanna battle me, come test
your nonsense, gets pounded into six pence
our conflict like a snow plow to a picket fence

and in this pen, there’s poison (awww shit)
toxic, you can compare it to Aushwitz
feelin’ nauseous, step on stage and rock shit
and turn a crowd of stoners into a fuckin mosh pit

the top pick, when the topic is skill
I’m hot bitch, yeah you know I’m tropic, you’re chill
your gloc spits, well go on then cock it at will
your not real, I put that on my hospital bill

[Fa-Q]

Well first off, welcome to TR man and this is a good first drop. You need to work on your vocabulary but other than that, your structure is pretty good. Definately a good first drop...keep it up

Do you always write in double couplets

[Solace]

What's up Cole.

[dR3]

What's up Cole.

Word.

[DƎRDYPK]

nice piece broski
glad you put it up
we gotta hop on some audio sometime

[Spyder]

seemed weaker in the descriptive aspect and vocab as Fa-q said

but maybe your concentrating on flow and delivery more for audio, not bad
but not best ive seen from u