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Quick One From Yesterday

Postby Solace » Jun 28th, '10, 04:31

Tear the day, dissing me is just declaring wage on your rep,
Slit your liver, I'll be laughing as I serenade to your death,
Stare and break if you step or if you cross, B, like hockey stuff,
Only time I'm an ass is when you realize you suck donkey nuts,
My lines can not be fucked, I will slice and dice your rapping,
My rhymes can not be touched even if you Michael Jackson,
Verbally rifle blasting then I'll take a fucking knife to stab in,
Why I'm rapping? You a bitch, you get no right to ask this,
Back bitch to snipe you facists, here to empty these haters,
Proud of your girl? I got her in my pocket like an mp3 player,
Bending these traitors, when I'm spitting it's like an acid trap,
You're laughing gas the way ya wackest raps get my ass to laugh,
Telling me to calm my diss? Why you always reading all my shit?
I'd like to call you Zipper the way you always being on my dick,
Spitting, peeing on your wit, shitting on your fucking t-shirt,
Best bring nothing weaker if you plan on touching ether.
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Re: Quick One From Yesterday

Postby Solace » Jun 30th, '10, 16:33

I hate you all. :coffee:
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Re: Quick One From Yesterday

Postby gutawafang » Jul 1st, '10, 02:56

LOL. The Michael Jackson line is so lame to me. :tounge2:

But the whole swagg attitude is the shiznit man. Nice quick drop. :y: Flow is good too. :flower:
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Re: Quick One From Yesterday

Postby dR3 » Jul 1st, '10, 03:26

WTF dude, did you really write this? Awful. :facepalm
No man, just kidding witcha, it's as good as always!
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Re: Quick One From Yesterday

Postby Solace » Jul 1st, '10, 04:41

Thanks both. Much appreciated. :worship:
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Re: Quick One From Yesterday

Postby bullet_boy46 » Jul 1st, '10, 04:42

Only time I'm an ass is when you realize you suck donkey nuts


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Solace wrote:Oh stop your making me blush :blinking:

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Re: Quick One From Yesterday

Postby Solace » Jul 1st, '10, 04:46

bullet_boy46 wrote:
Only time I'm an ass is when you realize you suck donkey nuts


:shock:

An ass is another word for a donkey. The only time where I accept being called an ass is when you realize you suck my nuts. It's wordplay. :coffee:
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Re: Quick One From Yesterday

Postby bullet_boy46 » Jul 1st, '10, 05:14

Solace wrote:
bullet_boy46 wrote:
Only time I'm an ass is when you realize you suck donkey nuts


:shock:

An ass is another word for a donkey. The only time where I accept being called an ass is when you realize you suck my nuts. It's wordplay. :coffee:

i knew what a donkey was... :coffee:
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Re: Quick One From Yesterday

Postby Solace » Jul 1st, '10, 05:18

Congratulations to you, yet again.
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Re: Quick One From Yesterday

Postby bullet_boy46 » Jul 1st, '10, 05:21

Solace wrote:Congratulations to you, yet again.

.... :unsure:
Solace wrote:Oh stop your making me blush :blinking:

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Re: Quick One From Yesterday

Postby dR3 » Jul 1st, '10, 14:13

Solace wrote:Thanks both. Much appreciated. :worship:

So you saw my hidden message? :worship:
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Re: Quick One From Yesterday

Postby Solace » Jul 1st, '10, 17:29

dR.dR3 wrote:
Solace wrote:Thanks both. Much appreciated. :worship:

So you saw my hidden message? :worship:

Yeah lmao at first I was like, Smh dR3 trolling then I just highlight out of curiosity and yeaa. :sweating:
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