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Hearing Voices

Postby ChronicJon » Jun 28th, '10, 09:00

When I see the negative things that are happening,
I realize it might be in vain so why am I rappin' then,
Many people hate me, I just feel like slappin' them,
Clappin' them, up, cause they have no business tappin' in,
I boast cause I wanna believe in me and my raps,
My flows, my rhyming, myself and my lyrical attacks,
But, numerous days pass by like I just destroyed the moon,
When I pass by all I hear is come here and avoid the goon,
I'm blessed I realize the heavens are there to stop my demise,
Otherwise, if it's lies in my mind there would be a rise,
In tension, It's not my intention, in no way to fail hip-hop,
Rap might as well be my invention, I can't come to a sick stop,
Being tossed around like a yo-yo, but I won't stand it oh-no,
Yo, you don't know me so know, I won't take shit from no hoe,
I'm going crazy, I'm hearing voices, my point is, I'm gone,
Out of my mind, cause of rap, but it makes me feel at home,
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Re: Hearing Voices

Postby Fa-Q » Jun 28th, '10, 09:40

You wrote this to a Shadowville beat, didn't you
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Re: Hearing Voices

Postby ChronicJon » Jun 28th, '10, 09:42

Fa-Q wrote:You wrote this to a Shadowville beat, didn't you

Yeah :8)
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Re: Hearing Voices

Postby BILI » Jun 28th, '10, 21:56

Love it man,it wasnt anything complex but still nice,love that moon line,flow was :worship:

Nice nice,this first time I saw your raps :y:
Check my new drop if you have some time ;)
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Re: Hearing Voices

Postby ChronicJon » Jun 29th, '10, 00:06

BILI wrote:Love it man,it wasnt anything complex but still nice,love that moon line,flow was :worship:

Nice nice,this first time I saw your raps :y:
Check my new drop if you have some time ;)

Thanks for peeping it :smoking:

And when you post your raps I´ll be sure to feed it :y:
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Re: Hearing Voices

Postby BILI » Jun 29th, '10, 00:20

ChronicJon wrote:
BILI wrote:Love it man,it wasnt anything complex but still nice,love that moon line,flow was :worship:

Nice nice,this first time I saw your raps :y:
Check my new drop if you have some time ;)

Thanks for peeping it :smoking:

And when you post your raps I´ll be sure to feed it :y:

np man

check my Reintroduction
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