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My Last Drop

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My Last Drop

Postby Spyder » Jun 28th, '10, 15:47

unfinished buy i didnt have the aspiration to complete it, and i wont any time soon
the tourney will take me to 5k then a huge ridiculously gay long shoutty and im off
hope to catch you on MSN, [email protected] is mine add me



I fly and glide through the sky as my chariots broken
Arrive bearing smoke along with the scariest omens
Arise as they notice for I am rarely outspoken
Contemplating my demise, but do not dare as its hopeless
Sitting in fear I approach them, clouds surrounding my step
Their eyes squint at the stench of my souring breath
Ears piercing the louder I get my voice shakes the entire earth
For I am sure to keep speaking until I am heard
My vile word reigns supreme and showers the land
Their knees bleed from each bow to the man
They duck, cower and beg, head down in the sand
All falling victim to the power at hand.
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Re: My Last Drop

Postby DƎRDYPK » Jun 28th, '10, 17:41

:'(

your very last drop?
It was nice
but It wasn't even a whole verse mayne!! :'(
what the fuck
that leaves me as....the only Mainer on here :'(
what d HELL?!

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Re: My Last Drop

Postby Spyder » Jun 28th, '10, 19:14

thanks pk :worship:

hit me up on msn sometime, im rarely on though
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Re: My Last Drop

Postby BILI » Jun 28th, '10, 21:52

Wow,that was dope man,you became really dope.I love how your vocab got bigger.It even flowed nice :y:

Sry to see you leave tho :(
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Re: My Last Drop

Postby Spyder » Jun 29th, '10, 00:54

thanks BILIIIIIIIII :worship:
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Re: My Last Drop

Postby gutawafang » Jun 29th, '10, 02:25

See ya Spyder. :wave:
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Re: My Last Drop

Postby Solace » Jun 29th, '10, 03:05

That was pretty dope, and though short it was quick to the point and the end line was a good closer...Peace Spy.
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Re: My Last Drop

Postby Spyder » Jun 29th, '10, 22:56

thanks man
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