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Reintroduction

Postby BILI » Jun 28th, '10, 18:23

Haters can spread their pussies in 1 hip and hop off my dick(hip hop)
Hear this,say goodbye quick and then die prick
Its my time to shine,time for me to be in pole position(formula 1,when you`re the best)
From now on I`ll rhyme like its all competition
Well this aint a tournament,but its sure unreal(Unreal Tournament)
Redeemer in my basement,I`ll make sure you anneal(Redeemer is a gun from UT)
You woudn`t get laid if you was in bed with Hera(Godess of marriage)
I fly like a fuckin sparrow that spreads the cholera(movies called Sparrow about cholera)
Ima pirate on graveyard,watching how Cap'n Crunch dies(Pirate-Jack Sparrow)
See homie I spit hard,just like I punch lines
Yeah Ima Cro but for you I will be a cop(Cro Cop)
A rap pro,when I spit I can make TV stop
This is just a quick reintroduction
So just wait till I pick the key to destruction

I`ll explain some lines later :y:

Thx for any feed :flower:
Last edited by BILI on Jun 29th, '10, 02:40, edited 4 times in total.
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Re: Reintroduction

Postby ThomasJ » Jun 28th, '10, 19:02

Cool :y:
...The mortician of love, sent from above
Forced entry, the more wenchy, the more stingy I become
Been doing this for more than a quarter century, I'm just numb...
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Re: Reintroduction

Postby BILI » Jun 28th, '10, 19:07

TJthaGreat wrote:Cool :y:

Thx man

But could you maybe giva a deeper feed if its not a problem :flower:
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Re: Reintroduction

Postby ThomasJ » Jun 28th, '10, 19:08

Not really... I'm not a rapper LOL
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Re: Reintroduction

Postby BILI » Jun 28th, '10, 20:31

TJthaGreat wrote:Not really... I'm not a rapper LOL

Ok,cool then
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Re: Reintroduction

Postby BILI » Jun 28th, '10, 22:14

Anyone feeding nowdays anymore? :(
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Re: Reintroduction

Postby Fa-Q » Jun 29th, '10, 01:57

Good drop BILI...where you been?
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Re: Reintroduction

Postby BILI » Jun 29th, '10, 02:49

Fa-Q wrote:Good drop BILI...where you been?

Thx man,well I`ve been here and there,some stuff needed to be taken care off,from now on I`ll feed and drop more :y:

I pinky promise
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Re: Reintroduction

Postby Solace » Jun 29th, '10, 03:04

You've dropped so much better before, this was REALLY weak for your standards BILI. Like your punches you attempted were just wack it's like "Be ready to say Hello to my Kitty (Hello Kitty, get it?)" lol...But get back in the flow of shit brother. :flower:
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Re: Reintroduction

Postby BILI » Jun 29th, '10, 13:35

Solace wrote:You've dropped so much better before, this was REALLY weak for your standards BILI. Like your punches you attempted were just wack it's like "Be ready to say Hello to my Kitty (Hello Kitty, get it?)" lol...But get back in the flow of shit brother. :flower:

thx :y:
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Re: Reintroduction

Postby BILI » Jul 3rd, '10, 01:14

bump :flower:
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Re: Reintroduction

Postby ChronicJon » Jul 3rd, '10, 04:12

This was decent enough. Some punches were kinda cheesy but some of 'em worked just fine :y:

I could get in the flow better without those explanations in the middle though. Overall it was decent :flower:
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