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You're All I Have

Postby Solace » Jun 29th, '10, 03:32

I was totally not expecting to release this but I decided "Fuck it" considering I want to keep the name out there. I think it's pretty decent too.

In this world where there is nothing but broken society,
And where I'm choked and in need a token beside of me,
I'm frozen entirely, in the sea my boat won't float entirely,
But it's worth a try if someone's there to play hide and seek,
If someone's there to say "Hi" to me, then life is a paradise,
But I'd never know what it rolls, yeah right it's a pair-a-dice,
Never point out your problems so why do you stare at mine?
Life is easier said than done, Death too, so do you care to try?
'Cause I'd try anything for you...Come on, just name it,
I'm dawned and wasted, please can we stop the hatred?
I cried, I'm stressed, it seems that there's no time to rest,
I'm tired yet I feel I should do more though I tried my best,
Knowing that we both fucked up, this shit'll never end,
For real my only damn wish is for us to be friends again,
Fuck for so long I was wrong acting ruthless and cruel,
Beat myself up for treating you oh so fuckin' useless, a tool,
I'm trying to be truthful to you, this is the confession I got,
Lastly I'm sorry whether you're willing to accept it or not.

You're all I have in this sad excuse for a life,
Say Goodbye as I beckon now (as I beckon now),
You're all I have in this sad excuse for a life,
You made every second count (every second count).
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Re: You're All I Have

Postby classthe_king » Jun 29th, '10, 03:38

:'(
You think your personal attacks make up for what you lack?
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Re: You're All I Have

Postby gutawafang » Jun 29th, '10, 03:38

Wow. I don't know what to say. :worship:
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Re: You're All I Have

Postby Solace » Jun 30th, '10, 16:32

Thanks guys.

@iRhyme, Good suggestion .. :y:
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Re: You're All I Have

Postby Robbie G » Jul 1st, '10, 18:12

Really good piece. :y:

whens the audio coming?
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Re: You're All I Have

Postby Solace » Jul 1st, '10, 18:30

Thanks. And never lmao.
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Re: You're All I Have

Postby Guess.Whos.Back :) » Jul 1st, '10, 22:20

Wow Solace that was fucking dope, you got better, wow you got better
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Re: You're All I Have

Postby Solace » Jul 2nd, '10, 00:21

Thanks, whoever you are. :flower:
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