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Narcissist, I mean, nah sissies

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Narcissist, I mean, nah sissies

Postby gutawafang » Jun 29th, '10, 07:34

The attention, the hatred, I enjoy every moment of it
I’m transparent, over see-through, I’m too open to it
I’m too much into it, I feel touched you love it too much
Sentence me to death, fuck it I’ve had enough with this judge
You fucking judge me like a cover, you didn’t see the content
I’m not contented, I’m unsatisfied that you fuckers pretend
Saying that it’s my fault that I’m always feeling down
Always crying like a sissy, telling me to kill it now
I wanna end it because I love myself, I don’t wanna hurt me
I don’t wanna hurt Leah, because she really loves me
Yes, I enjoy every frame in this movie that I’m myself directing
I’m writing my own script, it ain’t your story I’m affecting
I care only bout me, fuck females, I’m an asshole, yeah
Fuck, I’m the superior-fucking-upper-class role, yeah?
The entire world’s laughing at me, I know that from the ECHOes
That don’t seem to end, like the coughs of a 60 year old smoker with a bad throat
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Re: Narcissist, I mean, nah sissies

Postby Fa-Q » Jun 29th, '10, 07:39

Damn guta you need to drop more...seems like this piece jumped all over the place as far as emotion and topic but it was good...loved that last line...keep it up
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Re: Narcissist, I mean, nah sissies

Postby gutawafang » Jun 29th, '10, 07:43

Fa-Q wrote:Damn guta you need to drop more...seems like this piece jumped all over the place as far as emotion and topic but it was good...loved that last line...keep it up


Thank you man, really. Thanks for the feed man. I will drop more then. :flower:
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