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Postby bullet_boy46 » Jun 30th, '10, 05:34

Intro: inside i feel dead...............feel like im laying on a hospital bed...

Verse: lately i've been feeling dead, facing all these fucking thoroughbreds
you hear what i said? shot with led right through the heart, time to go to bed
always the motherfucking shortstack falling for the diversionary attack
please bitches stop giving me this shitty flak, i had enough of the yak
stopping me bitch thats preposterus, please you picking the wrong time,
trying to fucking face me when im in my beasting prime
like Optimus, i feel like this is it, it may be over, but in a way i feel sublimed
cause i know i can do it just like kendra wilkinson can..
please..i can be dead and buried, i'd still be above your level man...

(2X) Chrous: I feel dead, like i died inside
i tried to abide with my inner self
the way im going, time to go on the shelf

Verse: all has been said, and all has been done
the way im currently spitting i feel like a fucking sally lunn
cause im spitting hot like a fucking gatling gun
man i cant believe im doing this, when i reminsce
i think of all the shit i did, i wonder "why did i do this?"
the first time was just shit, but after that i was getting respect
but then i ruined it once again, it is time to correct it
i just want to say im sorry to all of yous, this shits legit
coming straight from the heart, every single part of it....


(2X) Chrous: I feel dead, like i died inside
i tried to abide with my inner self
the way im going, time to go on the shelf

[END]


im sorry...its not very long but i dont care...
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Re: Dead (Sorry to TR)

Postby Element. » Jun 30th, '10, 07:41

hey where have you been ?
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Re: Dead (Sorry to TR)

Postby dR3 » Jun 30th, '10, 14:20

YOOOO bullet boy, where you been man?
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Re: Dead (Sorry to TR)

Postby bullet_boy46 » Jun 30th, '10, 19:00

dR.dR3 wrote:YOOOO bullet boy, where you been man?
whats uppp....i've been thinking alot lately....
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Re: Dead (Sorry to TR)

Postby Element. » Jun 30th, '10, 19:24

bullet_boy46 wrote:
dR.dR3 wrote:YOOOO bullet boy, where you been man?
whats uppp....i've been thinking alot lately....


what about?
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Re: Dead (Sorry to TR)

Postby bullet_boy46 » Jun 30th, '10, 19:26

Element. wrote:
bullet_boy46 wrote:
dR.dR3 wrote:YOOOO bullet boy, where you been man?
whats uppp....i've been thinking alot lately....


what about?

all the stuff i did to everyone
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Re: Dead (Sorry to TR)

Postby Element. » Jun 30th, '10, 19:28

what on TR ?
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Re: Dead (Sorry to TR)

Postby bullet_boy46 » Jun 30th, '10, 19:29

^ yea..
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Re: Dead (Sorry to TR)

Postby Element. » Jun 30th, '10, 19:31

bullet_boy46 wrote:^ yea..



What like ?
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Re: Dead (Sorry to TR)

Postby Solace » Jun 30th, '10, 19:31

:laughing: You're sorry for what you did on TR?

Is this the new Laguna Beach or something?
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Re: Dead (Sorry to TR)

Postby bullet_boy46 » Jun 30th, '10, 19:33

Solace wrote::laughing: You're sorry for what you did on TR?

Is this the new Laguna Beach or something?

NO lmfao, not just TR, excluding TR i have alot on my mind, lmao
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Re: Dead (Sorry to TR)

Postby Solace » Jun 30th, '10, 19:36

Not like you killed anyone. You have an attempt at a depressing, emotional piece which is a "Sorry to TR" for what you've done...Like who gives a fuck?

But you do what you will. Ain't a sweat off my back. :y:
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Re: Dead (Sorry to TR)

Postby bullet_boy46 » Jun 30th, '10, 19:38

Solace wrote:Not like you killed anyone. You have an attempt at a depressing, emotional piece which is a "Sorry to TR" for what you've done...Like who gives a fuck?

But you do what you will. Ain't a sweat off my back. :y:

edited name :whistle: i thought that was one of MY best raps
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Re: Dead

Postby Element. » Jun 30th, '10, 20:00

i think you need abit of work, maybe?
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Re: Dead

Postby bullet_boy46 » Jun 30th, '10, 20:03

Element. wrote:i think you need abit of work, maybe?


i do
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