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Postby DƎRDYPK » Jul 1st, '10, 23:54

Just getting some ish off my chest
ain't aimed @ anyone here :sweating:

there's 5 inputs on your interface for mics. But you can't rock one?
Forget your demo! trash your raps! It's better if you stop sun...
demo tape?!... please...that's so 19-90
if your going somewhere with that so is every wack fuck behind me...
I guess anything is possible if Soulja Boy gets airplay
but fuck that kid he think go hard? I'll beat him to death with hairspray
you? your something different....I'll label you a blip
not Dizzy Harrison though...cause you remain a blip bitch!
wait a minute yo...quit your verses.... your wasting time kid...
you can catch the flu, rap a verse of mine but never rhyme "SICK"
even if I'm not on that audio...i'm still on my grind bitch
you can try your lil raps but in the end. Imma shine kid
I don't know why I wrote this? we supposed to be homies
I guess I take things too serious? oh well you can blow me
beefing ain't a word for this. it's more like....victory?
your a nobody...& me.....I'll go down in history
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Re: "Wackcrewsarestraight.DumbmothafuckasIgotaproblemwit"

Postby Solace » Jul 2nd, '10, 00:50

^Flu punchline was so weak...Dickrider :shakehead:

Average piece tbh, just saying shit, no spectacular rhymes or flow, mostly fillers imo.
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Re: "Wackcrewsarestraight.DumbmothafuckasIgotaproblemwit"

Postby DƎRDYPK » Jul 2nd, '10, 01:07

Thanks for peeping it you 2
very average piece on my behalf
just some shit I had to drop in toilet town :shifty:

blaze 1 stay up
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Postby gutawafang » Jul 2nd, '10, 01:39

this is a keystyle.

not bad overall. but yeah, i seen better shits. :y:
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Re: "Wackcrewsarestraight.DumbmothafuckasIgottaproblemwit"

Postby DƎRDYPK » Jul 4th, '10, 01:34

easy as abc 123

upping because I'm an asshole :-s
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