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Punchline Special (KEYSTYLE)

Postby bullet_boy46 » Jul 4th, '10, 02:16

if you throw a punch ima weave it like fake hair
hit you with a hook and then ride like a state fair
gargoyle rap at the top and i stay there
not the type to babysit these rappers like a daycare
i bet you'll never climb the charts because your scared of heights
step up prepare to fight, i bet that i could eat you with a rhyme from last year
a bunch of pussy bitches better get a pap smear
so high out of sight like a blacc lear jet
in the sky when i rhyme all the fans cheer
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Re: Punchline Special (KEYSTYLE)

Postby bullet_boy46 » Jul 4th, '10, 03:01

bump :coffee:
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Re: Punchline Special (KEYSTYLE)

Postby Solace » Jul 4th, '10, 04:43

You don't deserve a bump what teh fuck do you do for CW. :shakehead:


Shitty piece, you can barely write and you try to pull off a KEYSTYLE punchline cypher..just no.
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Re: Punchline Special (KEYSTYLE)

Postby bullet_boy46 » Jul 4th, '10, 04:48

Solace wrote:You don't deserve a bump what teh fuck do you do for CW. :shakehead:


Shitty piece, you can barely write and you try to pull off a KEYSTYLE punchline cypher..just no.


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Re: Punchline Special (KEYSTYLE)

Postby Solace » Jul 4th, '10, 04:55

Actually mine is. :whistle:

But on the real, this was horrible.

i bet you'll never climb the charts because your scared of heights

Was alright, but you structured it really bad...

Beware-tonight, you scared-of-heights so you'll never climb the charts.


Or something would've been nice (don't use that line btw).
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Re: Punchline Special (KEYSTYLE)

Postby bullet_boy46 » Jul 4th, '10, 04:57

ill feed both of yours, i just wrote new shit, ive been increasing my punchline use :coffee:
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