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I Speak A Sound.

Postby R.A.G.E In Darkness » Jul 5th, '10, 04:15

A Symphony.. Musician-Running-Blood that is In-To-Me...
You-listen.. Coming-up in This-Industry...
in it's History... When-I-Flow Pen-Is-Whole of my Misery..
End-To-Those who Oppose, my Supremecy..
Then-I-Chose, just to Freeze all my Enemies..
Bend-A-Flow with the Ease of a Lyrical-Tryant..
Send-A-Blow till you Breathe in a Spiritual-Silence....
Rage-In-The-Darkness, Caging-The-Heartless...
Train with the Pain and the Flame-Of-A-Sparked-Fist...
Gaining-An-Offense, Taming-The-Barkless...
Brain is Insane but I Came-Wit-The-Loch-Ness...
Ancient and Rockin', Raining-Wit-Toxins...
Frame being Stained by the Lames that I'm Boxin..
Amazing Designing, Retaining-My-Rhyming...
Distained by the people who Came-In-Denying...
Lyrically-Inclined in The Land-Of-Da-Tyrants...
Mystically-Aligned Wit the Hands-Of-A-Giant...
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Re: I Speak A Sound.

Postby classthe_king » Jul 5th, '10, 04:16

What
You think your personal attacks make up for what you lack?
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Re: I Speak A Sound.

Postby classthe_king » Jul 5th, '10, 04:17

The
You think your personal attacks make up for what you lack?
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Re: I Speak A Sound.

Postby classthe_king » Jul 5th, '10, 04:17

Fuck
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Re: I Speak A Sound.

Postby gutawafang » Jul 5th, '10, 04:18

Flow is there, structure is there. Nice multis man. Nice. :y:
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Re: I Speak A Sound.

Postby BILI » Jul 5th, '10, 13:52

Damn dude,you spitting hard,that was straight fire :worship: :worship: Multies are :worship: ,your rhyme scheme :worship:

Keep it up,keep it up,we need more people like you :y:
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