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50 cents For a Nickelbag? naww I dont eat M&Mz

Postby DƎRDYPK » Jul 5th, '10, 04:50

Something I did up quick :sweating:
few sources of inspiration :wub:

I smoke wack mc's quicker than J Roc smoking bud :staticsmoking:
more violent than Solace without his skate. I'll be pissed choking sluts
I went to "Class" with the "King" so best believe I know my "Sentus"
I show my "Rage In Darkness" by beating bats in the sky senseless
Like in Super Mario 64 I'm jumping around screaming "YAHHHHHHHHH HAAAAAHHHH"
tell me where's my chronic John? I'll put a "bullet" in your "boy" then pop ya
I show no love for "2sDay" I live everyday like Fried Day
I'm not no Fred Durst but I'm doing things "My Way"
I don't care what your rhymes say I'll leave them "X'ed Out"
you thought you was "X'ed Up" ? You probly never seen the naked breasts out :o
in other news Chambers asked Sticcy "Why you mad though?"
while that went down....I sat down & toked up my last bowl
the FaQ of the matter is who I'm StricTTly Aimming for?
nobody.....at all........only these kids who call me satan or
say I'm up to no good? I'm just writing in my notebook
the verses might blow your mind so on the front I wrote don't look
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Re: PK aisle 42o

Postby gutawafang » Jul 5th, '10, 05:18

Lacks Fishy.
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Re: 50 cents For a Nickelbag? naww I dont eat M&Mz

Postby DƎRDYPK » Jul 5th, '10, 05:31

I missed some famz but I'll cover that when I got some more time :wave:
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Re: 50 cents For a Nickelbag? naww I dont eat M&Mz

Postby gutawafang » Jul 5th, '10, 05:49

Hahaha man. Chill. It's very good nameplay man. ;)

The usual dope PK shit. :worship:
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Re: 50 cents For a Nickelbag? naww I dont eat M&Mz

Postby Fa-Q » Jul 5th, '10, 07:51

Nice shouty, dope drop
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Re: 50 cents For a Nickelbag? naww I dont eat M&Mz

Postby classthe_king » Jul 5th, '10, 14:52

That was awesome :laughing:
You think your personal attacks make up for what you lack?
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Re: 50 cents For a Nickelbag? naww I dont eat M&Mz

Postby BILI » Jul 5th, '10, 16:57

Fuck you :angry:
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Re: 50 cents For a Nickelbag? naww I dont eat M&Mz

Postby J Roc » Jul 5th, '10, 16:58

DƎRDYPK wrote:Something I did up quick :sweating:
few sources of inspiration :wub:

I smoke wack mc's quicker than J Roc smoking bud :staticsmoking:
more violent than Solace without his skate. I'll be pissed choking sluts
I don't care what your rhymes say I'll leave them "X'ed Out"
you thought you was "X'ed Up" ? You probly never seen the naked breasts out :o
in other news Chambers asked Sticcy "Why you mad though?"
while that went down....I sat down & toked up my last bowl


Word@That. hahaha thanks for tha shouty , Stay on ur punchline grinddd mezzzine
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Re: 50 cents For a Nickelbag? naww I dont eat M&Mz

Postby Almostlity » Jul 5th, '10, 17:06

Try wordplay me motherfucker. :shifty:
Trimss wrote:> Alm goat
> Alm still goat

> Alm goat


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Re: 50 cents For a Nickelbag? naww I dont eat M&Mz

Postby ChronicJon » Jul 5th, '10, 19:16

I took that as a compliment...I hope I´m not wrong :whistle:
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Re: 50 cents For a Nickelbag? naww I dont eat M&Mz

Postby Tash8 » Jul 5th, '10, 19:23

remember this bitches,
I'm coming before U
-like the letter T
start running,you better B
-and A, can't you C
that I'm mad dunno Y
and I'm me Big T
and I will P on this Beat.
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Re: 50 cents For a Nickelbag? naww I dont eat M&Mz

Postby Solace » Jul 12th, '10, 03:35

Facebook group influence title? Lol.

Overall the piece was decent, i liked the way you went with this tho it couldve been better keep at it

Ill be waiting on some audio nig.
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