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*Eminem Goin through changes, my version*

Postby Boston » Jul 5th, '10, 17:51

well, i doubt yall kno only a few people do here, but i spent the last month in prison so i got inspired in there to write some shit.. so i chose this beat.. if yall actually kno to rap to flow wont be as confusing 2 u.. lol.. heres a link to the instrumental http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uR3NvXwZKro

but heres my verse..


it seems like yesterday, stuck in a cell/
was it, the weed or me being stubborn as hell/
maybe, the trees n greed got me troubled as well/
comin from hell, clean n free n have someone to help/
and i know im not all alone, no/
anytime im feelin down i got my boys n girls to call their phone, so/
its never me alone even if its me at home/
i get the warm and comfort just to hear em through the speaker phone/
in a screamin tone sayin "why test ya luck"/
its a place you dont wana go i cant stress enough/
man depression sucks/
but i can make it through it i just know i can
to bad i had to learn my fuckin lesson cuffed/
when doors close another opens, its the way of life/
i got my dad n mother showin love to help make it right/
ive mistakened twice/
i know it damn sucks but ive learned to man up
n learned how to take advice/
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Re: *Eminem Goin through changes, my version*

Postby classthe_king » Jul 5th, '10, 17:55

Rhymes were dope and that flowed great
You think your personal attacks make up for what you lack?
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Re: *Eminem Goin through changes, my version*

Postby Boston » Jul 5th, '10, 23:43

good looks my dude
ill be recording soon
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Re: *Eminem Goin through changes, my version*

Postby Solace » Jul 5th, '10, 23:48

Pretty dope finished version man :y:
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Re: *Eminem Goin through changes, my version*

Postby Boston » Jul 6th, '10, 00:06

solace your VIP to me so ill send u somethin i recorded on my webcam haha
well its that verse
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Re: *Eminem Goin through changes, my version*

Postby Solace » Jul 6th, '10, 00:16

Lol shiet that'd be cool. :y:
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Postby autotooner » Jul 6th, '10, 04:04

damn, lookin good. :y:
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Re: *Eminem Goin through changes, my version*

Postby Boston » Jul 6th, '10, 21:55

good looks my dude
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Re: *Eminem Goin through changes, my version*

Postby J Roc » Jul 7th, '10, 03:24

Boston still a problem haha
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Re: *Eminem Goin through changes, my version*

Postby 77o77 » Jul 7th, '10, 05:39

classthe_king wrote:Rhymes were dope and that flowed great
I love bein hated, it's great
It let's me know that I made it
I wouldn't have it no other way

CAPS L0CK
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Re: *Eminem Goin through changes, my version*

Postby Boston » Jul 8th, '10, 12:33

thankkkkk u my dude
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