Tending to the pretending

[Just Silver]

Im a tongue twister get you lick locked
Rap on point and key like im gonna pick locks
Oh and just watch ,observe and such
I dont go out of state to go burn a "Dutch"
I m blurred enough so Springer show my face
I can bring it to the times, you are oh so late
And you will never find me slackin
I spit fire like a Chinese dragon
So much spit like a Siamese rapping
Time for the grass im priming my gasket
Signed to a casket, My own actions
Lead to succeed from the rhymes ive mastered
Im past it bastard, born then raised
But not raised much just plain gave up
Same damn fucks i never gave what
Setter of contenders who pleasure in bending
The rules contending and shredding mental nerve endings
Sent to school fending
Spit bars and tending to the pretending

[gutawafang]

nice read.

[Just Silver]

nice read.

Thanks

Your feeding a lot lately

[Fa-Q]

Not your best piece...yo Silv I think I know one of your problems is you have no precise style...Zu, Anon, Solace they all have orginal styles that everyone can differeciate immediately...maybe you work on thÀt

[Just Silver]

Not your best piece...yo Silv I think I know one of your problems is you have no precise style...Zu, Anon, Solace they all have orginal styles that everyone can differeciate immediately...maybe you work on thÀt

Thats one problem lol

But the biggest one is I think too quickly and end up doing keystyle after keystyle
I think if i sat down and thought about the process id do better

[Fa-Q]

Yea you need to think of concepts for songs, save them and write dope lines and plug them ain as you go along...that's what I do