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The Musical Orifice

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The Musical Orifice

Postby classthe_king » Jul 11th, '10, 16:21

I put my life in this music and I feel like if I lose it
I’m left with nothing so I grab the mic and abuse it
I feel like I am useless, another kid in the class
Now there kissin my ass cause I’m spittin this fast
Let’s revisit my past and see the fatal catastrophe
The betrayal attached to me and days full of agony
That created this masterpiece n amazes all that can see
The truth of the song with more pain than it has to be
I think I’m under the pressure of the deepest oceans
And everyone gave me poison when I needed potions
It’s these emotions that make sure the track is finished
The cruelty is fueling me to push it past the limits
I wanna tear up the mainstream, leave gashes in
Combining rhyme and melody like a master chemist
I don’t rap for gimmicks; I let the pen use my pain
To voice my struggle as music flows through my veins
You think your personal attacks make up for what you lack?
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Re: The Musical Orifice

Postby ThomasJ » Jul 11th, '10, 17:20

Nice :y:
...The mortician of love, sent from above
Forced entry, the more wenchy, the more stingy I become
Been doing this for more than a quarter century, I'm just numb...
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Re: The Musical Orifice

Postby DƎRDYPK » Jul 11th, '10, 18:46

This makes me wanna rip my PJ's off Hulk Hogan style & fuck the screen :wub:
seriously bro your getting better & better :smoking:
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Re: The Musical Orifice

Postby classthe_king » Jul 12th, '10, 02:38

Thanks :wub:
You think your personal attacks make up for what you lack?
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Re: The Musical Orifice

Postby DƎRDYPK » Jul 12th, '10, 02:40

DID YOU GET MY MSN MESSAGES?!
FUCK YO :o
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Re: The Musical Orifice

Postby Solace » Jul 12th, '10, 02:41

Yo that was pretty fuckin' nice man. Get back on your CW grind.
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Re: The Musical Orifice

Postby gutawafang » Jul 12th, '10, 06:55

Good flow, good multis. Dope all the way. :y:
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Re: The Musical Orifice

Postby classthe_king » Jul 12th, '10, 23:33

Thanks :worship:
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