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Radical. Nah man.

Postby gutawafang » Jul 12th, '10, 05:18

Yo, I lay in a position where my voice stands out, so listen
Open up your ears, here’s the objective of the mission
Broaden your minds, empower your fucking weak visions
Fuck whatever other voices, and distractions from lesbians
It’s time to pay attention, to the flow, it’s like a building
It’s so stable, it would stay up, it won’t topple on these children
And if it does, I would be God for one moment, I’d be shielding
I’d pray 5 times a day and spam my life savings on pilgrims
Blah, be religious? The chances for everybody are real slim
We could be walking in the light, but we know it’s still dim
I would love Him, cherish Him but man, fuck it until then
I would stand up to radicals, motheruckers I’d kill them
Get my point? I’m buying a bomb set from Osama on ebay
I’m trying to prove to us that whatever wrong, we pay
So blast this song in your speakers, if it’s good, replay it
It’s pointless to debate this, it’s a decision when we say it

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Re: Radical. Nah man.

Postby ThomasJ » Jul 12th, '10, 14:14

...The mortician of love, sent from above
Forced entry, the more wenchy, the more stingy I become
Been doing this for more than a quarter century, I'm just numb...
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Postby neversnooze » Jul 14th, '10, 05:42

damn guta this was awesome bro. it was like story telling with rhyming. i sensed laid back with some anger in your lyrics. the flow was great and good multies. 9/10 :y:
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Re: Radical. Nah man.

Postby gutawafang » Jul 14th, '10, 05:44

^ thank you very the much guys. :flower: :flower: :flower:
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