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Buffalo skin bullets

Postby Yah-hah » Jul 13th, '10, 16:40

Thoughts of a killer trapped in my Native mindset,
Praise the skies blessed, what will this Native try next,
Red hand I use to Reach in my dark quiver,
arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy stick my hand through ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
Cobra charm spitter I spew cuss word with venomous saliva,
Hit him with the sniper with 60 Indians sittin behind ya,
Muscogee Creek yeah homie we ridin with the whole tribe,
Sick enough to grab your ribcage and get your bones pried from both sides,
My bow skills are so ill I can shoot one arrow.......through both eyes,
Leavin you so blind to walk through the valley of the shadow of death,
No blade is sharper I'ma barber with no clippers maybe a scalpel at best,
Cuttin down through ya flesh eatin the apple from out of ya neck,
Leavin no skin my tent is open and that's where ya skin'll get stretched,
Soon as he finish his breath 100 Apaches come runnin in from the west,
Yeah smoke signals coming out of your own temple to my homies called Arapaho,
Machetes and hatchets slash his throat, incredibly graphic casket closed,


I swiftly lift these blades to ya face tearin ya presidents wig,
Native and crazed, erasin the face of America's resident prick,
Cause you're on death island the bridge to life is cold and narrow,
I'm holdin ya life got the coldest suprise shoot holes in ya eyes with my bow and arrow,
When the tomahawk lifts off to chop your bones and marrow,
I'll raise you up without a face and such like my only scarecrow,
You aint lookin bold ya scared bro, ya next breathe this could be,
You could see but with that hood we cut out holes where ya eyes should be
Look see, oh my bad I forgot you cant see with my blade still stuck in your face,
Here one sec let me rip it out now that this bitch is scalped leavin this fucker erased,
Yeah do you remember that glass tipped tomahawk I caught Uncle Sam with?
Sorry I gotta take another swipe my knuckles jammed and my fuckin hand slipped,
Damn kid wat happened all I see left is a few teeth, 3 fingers and an earlobe,
They fear strokes from the pen within this deerfolk,
My tears choke, the ears so, I fear no man,
I seer hope, into sheer dope, the way only a hero can,
It's clear though I fear no motherfucking Andrew Jackson,
When I ran through rappin he knows he can't do jack shit,
Removed my people so now chief says next person to scalp him'll win,
Grab the shovel shit I'll dig his ass up just to scalp him again,
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: Buffalo skin bullets

Postby Fa-Q » Jul 13th, '10, 16:45

Dope...was this orginally called Fuck Andrew Jackson like something we talked about?
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Re: Buffalo skin bullets

Postby 77o77 » Jul 13th, '10, 16:46

:worship: :worship:
DOPE is the only word i can think of that really summarizes this.
I love bein hated, it's great
It let's me know that I made it
I wouldn't have it no other way

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Re: Buffalo skin bullets

Postby TheHundred$ » Jul 13th, '10, 16:51

Dude thats so sick.

I really like the theme, it really gives an Indian kinds vibe ya know? like tribal.

As always great multis, great structure etc.
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Re: Buffalo skin bullets

Postby Yah-hah » Jul 13th, '10, 16:59

Thanks yall ya Fa-Q this was originally called Fuck Andrew Jackson but I wrote the first verse about two hours ago and scrapped the last half of the second verse and re-wrote it lol I dig this name better lmao but ya man thanks to the homies :y:
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: Buffalo skin bullets

Postby TheHundred$ » Jul 13th, '10, 17:02

Lol i have been trying to think of a hook that could go in between the verses lol that says buffalo skin bullets.
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Re: Buffalo skin bullets

Postby Yah-hah » Jul 13th, '10, 17:11

Lol yeah dude choruses are the only thing I kinda suck at lol so most of the time I just skip it lmao
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Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: Buffalo skin bullets

Postby TheHundred$ » Jul 13th, '10, 17:15

Yah-hah wrote:Lol yeah dude choruses are the only thing I kinda suck at lol so most of the time I just skip it lmao



I just think of Em's "Buffalo Bill, Bufa Bufalo Bill" lol
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Re: Buffalo skin bullets

Postby Yah-hah » Jul 13th, '10, 17:35

:laughing:
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: Buffalo skin bullets

Postby Emadyville » Jul 14th, '10, 00:27

honestly almost EVERY line/rhyme/multi stood out this was that dope, but i straight loved that line shoot an arrow...through both eyes :worship:

it's amazing too cause I felt like I had the flow down, and it flowed well, amazing verses man :y: :y:
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Re: Buffalo skin bullets

Postby Yah-hah » Jul 14th, '10, 02:15

Yeah me and my brother were just freestylin for kicks and that line popped in my head. Thanks Emady :y:
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Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: Buffalo skin bullets

Postby gutawafang » Jul 14th, '10, 02:16

Yah-hah wrote:
Yeah do you remember that glass tipped tomahawk I caught Uncle Sam with?



Who's Sam? Sam Uley? :laughing: The leader of the werewolf tribe in Twilight? :laughing:













Nah man, just kidding. I know what Uncle Sam is. Man, this shit is tight man. The structure ain't good but I still could flow to it because of the internal rhymes in the lines. I love all those weapons descriptions man. :flutter:

Sick multis too. :worship:
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Re: Buffalo skin bullets

Postby Yah-hah » Jul 14th, '10, 04:00

gutawafang wrote:
Yah-hah wrote:
Yeah do you remember that glass tipped tomahawk I caught Uncle Sam with?



Who's Sam? Sam Uley? :laughing: The leader of the werewolf tribe in Twilight? :laughing:













Nah man, just kidding. I know what Uncle Sam is. Man, this shit is tight man. The structure ain't good but I still could flow to it because of the internal rhymes in the lines. I love all those weapons descriptions man. :flutter:

Sick multis too. :worship:


Lol when has my structure been good :sweating: But yeah internal rhymes are my way of keeping the flow without having to worry too much about structure lol
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: Buffalo skin bullets

Postby Arabian Shady » Jul 14th, '10, 08:07

Wooord at the structure :shifty: hahahahahahahaha
but ths was tight man, i think your description keeps gettin better everytime i read you stuff, like just the images that pop up while i read 'em , they're enuf to make jason castrate himself,lol
but yea , the internals, multis and meta's kept me hooked untill the last bar,
dope shit homie, i kinda feel like i get repeptitive with the appreciation so you better slip :tounge2:

sick shit for reala!!!
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Re: Buffalo skin bullets

Postby Yah-hah » Jul 16th, '10, 11:02

Hahaha thanks bro :y:
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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